My response to Mindlovemisery’s Menagerie Writing Prompt #173 “Collage 28”

Together, they inhaled autumn:
Decomposing leaves,
Wet fox in undergrowth,
Brambles snagging sleeves,
Following fallen acorns until the sun broke through.
He found a perfect russet
Leaf for her to press,
Alleviate her distress
At his leaving.
She pumped into his suitcase
A cloud of her favourite scent,
He took photos as she posed,
Determined to remind him
Of their happiness.
Every day,
She’d sit and play
Their favourite songs
On the yellowed keys of the old piano.
After weeks of an empty bed
And meals alone,
Waiting for the telephone
To ring, she wrote
‘I Miss You’
A thousand times in a note,
Folded them into a boat
And launched it
From the jetty at the lake –
Where another ‘I Miss You’ boat
Came floating back.
© Kim M. Russell, 2016
Wow Kim you hooked me in with those magnificent opening lines, powerful piece and outstanding use of the collage. Love how you used the origami boats
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Thank you kindly and wishing you a wonderful rest of the weekend. See you tomorrow for the next challenge!
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I look forward to it Kim!
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