Answer Morning –
Where is the moon –
Where are the stars –
Where are the dreams?
Ah, said Morning –
Where is the dew –
Where are the birds –
Where are the poems?
Sparkled the Sun –
Where is your pen –
Where are the words –
Where are the rhymes?
Here, said the poet.
© Kim M. Russell, 2016

My response to Imaginary Garden with real Toads FASHION ME YOUR WORDS ~ a query
Gillena has asked us to fashion her a poem, using not more than 100 words, in the style of Emily Dickinson’s ‘Answer July’:
Answer July—
Where is the Bee—
Where is the Blush—
Where is the Hay?
Ah, said July—
Where is the Seed—
Where is the Bud—
Where is the May—
Answer Thee—Me—
Nay—said the May—
Show me the Snow—
Show me the Bells—
Show me the Jay!
Quibbled the Jay—
Where be the Maize—
Where be the Haze—
Where be the Bur?
Here—said the Year—
Great poem. I like the short simple answer to longish questions.
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I’m pleased you like it!
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I love the progression. Great ending with the creative spark.
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Thank you for reading and commenting, Ann!
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I loved the poet’s answer! …and the flow of the poem too 😃
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That makes me happy! 🙂
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We both saw the night and the morning very much… love the poet’s answer in the end… this was a tough challenge
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It was a tough challenge! I didn’t know whether to stick closely to the original, experiment or try a bit of both.
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Thank you for a marvellous response Kim, You stayed true to Emily’s yet you made it your own; Nice
much love…
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Thank you for the challenge, Gillena. It was a bit tricky but so worth the effort! Much love, Kim x
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Lovely …..
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Thanks Helen!
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Ah, well done. Speaks to the process of maturation.
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Thank you!
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Yes, yes, yes! Well done Kim.
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Thank you, Candy!
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And that is what we strive for….wonderful Kim
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Thank you!
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Lovely! ❤️
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Thank you!
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Beautiful
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Thank you, Susie!
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Fabulous! 🌹
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