Merged in a wash of blatant blue,
Ocean and sky meet in a kiss,
The seafarer surveys the view,
Standing alone in private bliss
That slopes down to a steep cliff’s edge,
Scattered with feverfew and sedge,
Where each brash dahlia tempts a bee.
But a sailor cannot forget the sea:
Like ships’ masts coming into view,
Hollyhocks and sunflowers burst through
Delphiniums and irises of blatant blue.
© Kim M. Russell, 2016

Image found on Pinterest
My second poem for dVerse Poets Pub Poetics: Johnny’s Garden is a reprise of a Quatern I posted last January.
I do love how you have used the flower’s name here… beautiful, but maybe for a sailor the sea would be more comforting.
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Even when a sailor is in his dotage, he will always long for the sea.
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Loved the images here and the way the first and last line mirror each other!
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Thank you!
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A garden by the sea, I like that. It sounds beautiful and peaceful
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Thank you for reading and commenting, Walter!
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You’re welcome
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Love the colorful bouquet of blooms and seafaring blissful views ~
This is my favorite line: Ocean and sky meet in a kiss~
Delightful poem Kim ~
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Thanks Grace!
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There is something comforting about an ordered garden. Your poem brings bliss.
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Thank you, Brian. I enjoy other people’s ordered gardens but I do like my own to be wild!
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Sigh. (And siren.) Just so very beautiful.
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Thanks, De. I’m not sure whether I prefer this version on the original Quatern.
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Very lovely…enjoyed visiting this garden. Thanks for the poetics theme at dVerse!
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Thanks for reading, Lynn!
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Funny thing.. sTiLL noW it seems..
Gardens of humans are often private..
but in Nature more they are alWays
open
naked
and free..
and i often
share my yard of
Garden in back yard
and even front yard view
with the world.. hey.. i worked
it alone for many years of sweat.. miGht
as weLL share.. what the hell.. done tHeRe
did thaT miGhT aS well free garden for now all open
as such..
free verse
garden too..
and hey.. i even
share what i eat at
the restaurant with the world..
but wife.. no.. if she makeS iT.. she sayS
iT’s private.. keep iT in ‘tween the tAble
your mouth and stomach only.. until what
comes
after
that..
hmm..
Life is kinda like
that what comes next
is never as great as what
is now when holy and sacred all..
every wHeRe i look i see an Open Garden
oF Free.. sAdly2.. i see too many closed one’s afrAid oF liGht..:)
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😀
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“Ocean and sky meet in a kiss” — wonderful.
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Thank you, Sasha!
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Ocean and sky meet in a kiss… wow!
The colours, the flowers.. and the rhymes… they are all beautiful 🙂
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Thank you, Vijita!
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a blue garden is the next best thing to a shingle garden for an old salt – I like the feeling of restlessness in the sailor contrasting with the rootedness of the garden
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Thank you, Laura 😊
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Lovely!
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Thank you, Rosemary!
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Brava. 🌹🌹🌹
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I am so pleased you like it. It originally wrote it as a quatern last January but I wasn’t sure about the repetition in it. When I set up the challenge, I’d forgotten about it but it just came to mind after I wrote ‘The Selfish Giant’s Garden’!
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I do truly love it and I am certain that others will love/enjoy it also. 😉 Really, truly seek out other means of further publication for this Awesome story. (@–>–)
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But a sailor cannot forget the sea.
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Absolutely!
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a blue garden is the next best thing to a shingle garden for an old salt – I like the feeling of restlessness in the sailor contrasting with the rootedness of the garden I do truly love it and I am certain that others will love/enjoy it also.
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a blue garden is the next best thing to a shingle garden for an old salt – I like the feeling of restlessness in the sailor contrasting with the rootedness of the garden Thank you, Laura 😊
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting!
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Thank you, Laura 😊 I do truly love it and I am certain that others will love/enjoy it also.
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