Night populates the city,
black ink spilling over pavements,
splashing quiet corners,
filling squares and parks, water-
falling down the riverbank,
soaking a couple as they hurry
from one
island of sodium light
to another,
across the Love Bridge,
an anchor for younger hearts
padlocked to railings.
On the far bank,
night is celebrated
with a candle-cake
of orange and white:
flames of churches and high-rises;
lanterns on bridges
rising one behind another
like mountain ridges;
lights trailed by cars
as they bounce off cobbles
and the illuminated windows
of trams rattling on their tracks.
© Kim M. Russell, 2016

My response to dVerse Poets Pub Poetics: Night-time Panorama
I am hosting this week’s Poetics challenge: to write a poem about a city at night, using the photograph as a starting point. We can write about our own cities, one we’ve visited or lived in previously, a city we would love to go to or just write about what we can see in the picture. But it must be at night.
This was a wonderful description that makes me understand that you had been there… the wonderful candle cake of those churches worked so well.
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Thank you, Björn. Although I returned on Saturday, the city is still there in my head, it made such an impression on me. I have so much more to write about it, I hope I don’t bore the pants off everyone!
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Fabulous poem and photo. 🌹
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Thank you!
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A beautiful poem Kim that really shows how this city has captured your heart. I love the photograph too and look forward to reading more about this place ☺
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I’m sure there will be more – at the risk of boring everyone to sleep 😉
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☺👍
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I love the imagery of the black ink spilling, island of sodium light and celebration of candle cake in orange and white ~
This city comes alive with your pen Kim ~ Thank you for the wonderful challenge ~
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Wroclaw is quite a dark place – their street lights are old-fashioned lantern ones and the light is orange-yellow. I wasn’t sure if the photographs would turn out OK and I had to use a little computer trickery on some of them!
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Stunning descriptive poetry Kim. Brings the place alive. Padlocked bridges reminds me of my time in Lithuania. Common there too.
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Thank you, Paul. I remember seeing padlocked bridges in other cities but not in the UK.
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No I have never seen them in the UK either. Unromantic bunch we are.
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🙂
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Lovely poem with great descriptions of the city. I felt like I was there.
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Never boring Kim. 🙂 I felt the energy and creativity in the cityscape you painted in dark brushes of words.
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Cities – if our friend – have a certain beauty about them. Lovely write.
Kind regards
Anna :o]
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Thank you Anna 🙂
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The night-time city scene is calling me there…especially the orange and white candle cake 🙂
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🙂
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a poem of differences Kim as visualised in your high contrast city- love those inky corners and the candle-cake churches
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Thank you, Laura!
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Loved the comparison of the night to a waterfall!
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Thanks!
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Hi.. Kim..
City liGhts
are nice but here
not as colorful as beach
niGhts.. what i really love
mosT iS diatoms
iN Summer
sAlt water of
Gulf Ocean
EvEnings where
sand exists beyond
toes to dreAms of
love as
shore
lines wash
humans togEtheR mOre..:)
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Shore lines was humans together more … y es
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Shore lines wash humans together more … I love that 😊
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And thanks
For this lovely
Inspiring
Prompt
And
Your
Poetic
Words too..:)
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opening lines really create the mood….a wonderful description…!
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Thank you Sree!
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