sunshine’s a memory
stuffed into feathery clouds
with tomorrow’s snow
Kim M. Russell, 2016

My response to Carpe Diem Universal Jane #8 gathering clouds
In this new episode of the Carpe Diem feature in honour of Jane Reichhold, Chèvrefeuille has inspired us with some ‘winter’ haiku by Jane:
gathering clouds
heavy and dark with holding
unfallen flakes
bell-tone circles
as path to meditation
across galaxies
and a few of his own:
mountain deep
a sky covering with snow
our way home
blue cold snow
warmed by fallen leaves
russet brown
© Chèvrefeuille
Nicely done, Kim ! I like this “sunshine stuffed into feathery clouds”.
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Thank you, Virginia!
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Lovely Kim….lovely imagery!
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Fantastic!
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Thanks Dorna!
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Very nicely crafted Kim.
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Thank you, Kristjaan!
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I like that very much. Each line, and the twist in the last
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You’ve made my day, Hamish!
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