Between the trees it’s blue,
as if the sky had fallen
and been transformed
into nodding blooms,
all-knowing fairy traps of truth.
It’s a soft echo of blue,
a Beltane pool
to dive into
and be swept away
by a current of old magic.
Kim M. Russell, 2017
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My response to dVerse Poets Pub Quadrille #32 – Echo
De is our host this Monday and she’s inviting us to dance with shadows in a poem of exactly 44 words (not including title), and including one given word. Today, we are playing with the word echo. We can make it a noun, a verb, or an adjective; get creative with it; make your whole poem one big echo, or slip it in there somewhere quietly. For inspiration, De has given us a few quotes and an Echo and the Bunnymen tune.
OH! THIS!
“all-knowing fairy traps of truth”
Delighted!
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What a splendid image… love all the way you can use an echo. A blue that is far from blues.
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Bluebells are magic. Really 🙂
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They are! 🙂
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I liked those fairy traps of truth.
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They really are supposed to make you speak the truth!
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A beautiful quadrille Kim and I love bluebells – your ‘all-knowing fairy traps of truth’ create such a wonderful image! :o) xxx
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Thanks Xenia!
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You created such atmosphere in the poem and then, when I saw the image, I just gasped. Wow!
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‘As if the sky had fallen’…a beautiful tribute to that dazzling blue.
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Thank you, Janice!
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In Texas, in Spring, the bluebells appear along the blue highways, in the ditches, in the chin of pastures, mixed in with thorn bushes & sagebrush. It startles the eyes. Repetitive images can be a form of echo; cool.
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What kind of bluebells are they, Glenn? I know that the Common English Bluebell only grows over here and that there are other species, some of which were brought to England and seem to have blended in with the indigenous ones – only they don’t have the intoxicating scent of the English bluebell.
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My goodness!❤️ Such a breathtaking quadrille, Kim!❤️
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Thanks Sanaa!
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Beautiful description of this photo.
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Thank you, Linda!
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I’m captivated by the “fairy traps of truth”.
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It’s said that anyone wearing a wreath of bluebells can speak only the truth. Also, bluebells may be used in love spells. If you turn an English bluebell inside out, you’ll win the heart of the one you desire. You can also prevent nightmares by stuffing a dream pillow with bluebells of hanging them near the bed.
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Lovely.
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Thank you!
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A very good poem. Thanks for sharing!
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Thanks for reading, Henrietta!
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Definitely magical! Beltan pool – what a wonderful image! (As a child I made May baskets and hung them on neighbors’ doors!)
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We seem to have bluebells everywhere at the moment – I just hope the cold doesn’t affect them – it’s got so chilly on the east coast of England.
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Gorgeous, Kim. You “painted” that photo beautifully!
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Thanks Walter!
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Echoes of Spring here. ❤ I love the images of falling sky and a Beltane pool.
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Thank you, Crystal!
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Such a lovely shade and carpet: It’s a soft echo of blue ~ Love these spring blooms Kim ~
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Bluebells are very special.
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sound and colour like waves, both indeed waves, lovely Kim! I could picture the blue echo among the trees like the sky has fallen that was a magical line
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Thanks Gina!
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Lovely poem and photo. Well done. 🙂
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Thank you 🙂
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Beautiful thoughts, beautiful poem, beautiful photo! 🙂
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Thank you!
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Completely delightful, Kim! I love…”all-knowing fairy traps of truth.” We don’t have blue bells here…I can only imagine what they look like in real life.
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Thank you, Gayle.
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That’s it. Exactly right. Perfect, in fact.
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Thank you, Sarah.
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Excellent! 🌹🌹🌹😎
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I was entranced from the first word to the last. And that photo is absolutely gorgeous!
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Thank you!
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What a beautiful expression for a lovely image! Wonderful poem!
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Thank you so much!
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Stunning imagery, Kim! I love the whimsical nature of it as well.
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting!
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My pleasure.
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