autumn evening
like whispered prayers
leaves float away © Dolores
shivering into rivers
on sporadic gusts of wind Kim M. Russell, 2017

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My response to Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge Month 2017 #9 – leaves float away (Dolores Fegan)
Today’s ‘hokku’ is by Dolores Fegan, a modern haiku poetess who is a regular contributor to CDHK.
Excellent! 🌹🌹😎
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i like the furtherance of distance and journey continuing in your response Kim
much love…
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Thanks Gillena! I’m trying to catch up on things at the moment after five days away – I didn’t realise how tricky it would be 😕
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Beautifl finish and great image!
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Thank you, Dolores!
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Lovely words to complete the lovely thought.
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Thank you, Rosemary!
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Awesome continuation Kim.
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I enjoy tan renga!
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