ura wo mise omote wo misete chiru momiji
now it reveals its hidden side
and now the other—thus it falls,
an autumn leaf © Ryokan Taigu
somersaulting in free-fall
delicate flash of colour Kim M. Russell, 2017

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My response to Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge Month 2017 #10 an autumn leaf (Ryokan Taigu)
Today’s ‘hokku’ is by lesser known classical haiku poet, Ryokan Taigu (1758-1831), who renounced the world at an early age to train at Sōtō Zen temple Kōshō-ji, refusing to meet with or accept charity from his family. When the Zen master Kokusen visited the temple, Ryōkan was so impressed with his demeanor that he became his disciple. When Kokusen died, Ryōkan left Entsū-ji to embark on a long pilgrimage. He lived much of the rest of his monastic life as a hermit, writing poetry, doing calligraphy, and communing with nature. His poetry is often very simple and inspired by nature. He loved children and sometimes forgot to beg for food because he was playing with the children of the nearby village. Ryōkan lived a very simple life, and stories about his kindness and generosity abound.
The ‘hokku’ we are using today is Ryokan’s Jisei (death-poem), which he gave Teishin, his close companion, on his deathbed.
The use of “free-fall” adds so much depth.
Thanks for dropping in to read mine Kim
Much love…
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Thank you, Gillena – always a pleasure 😉
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Lovely and vivid.
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Thanks Rosemary!
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Excellent! 🌹🌹😎
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Great post! 😊
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Thank you!
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