When I was at school I loved athletics, especially long jump. The feeling of sprinting up to the board as fast as I possibly could and then taking off into space filled me with expectation and elation, with the wind in my face and the dappled shadows of the trees in the sand, freshly raked from the previous jumper. The sand – a long way from the coast and no salt water in sight – sparked my imagination with seashells, pebbles and sea creatures until I landed at the other end of the pit. Lifting my feet heavily, I waded out of my dreams to check the tape against the hollow footprints.
Now I live near the coast, just a short drive to the wild beauty of North Norfolk beaches, where I am reminded of the long jump pit – I have completed the leap.
cool summer shadows
capture sparkles in their depths
dreaming of the past
Kim M. Russell, 2017
My response to dVerse Poets Pub Haibun Monday – Sport
Today Björn is our host for Haibun Monday and he has asked us to write a haibun about sport, which he says can be so many things: the things we hate to watch, or that we love; the excitement of winning or the depression of losing; a game of football at the pub or watching figure skating.
However, he also reminds us that sport is not just about competing. It’s about how we love to move our bodies, running, swimming cycling; it could be a game of golf with friends or running a marathon; or how we miss taking part in sport. Sport is a word that can be so much more than what fills the sport pages.
Björn asks for a story about sport in a short piece of prose and a haiku to add a dimension.
Love the haiku, Kim. Though sport makes my brain go numb I’m afraid.
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I’m not keen on it now but I loved running and jumping when I was a kid.
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It was getting hurt that put me off the athletic stuff. Ball games I was fine with. As long as my feet were on the ground I was fine 🙂
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Love this piece of your history…. Love your conclusion in jumping… to land in sand. I love that even though I could never do the long-jump-
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Thanks Björn! I used to be a whizzy little person – I wish I was a bit quicker on my feet now 😉
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“…I have completed the leap…”. What a great extended metaphor, Kim.
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Thank you, Sarah!
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What fun just to jump!!!
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I loved it!
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Love this story of your youth, Kim. And love the prose ending — living where you do, the leap completed. Wonderful haiku too!
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Thank you, Lillian. I mostly remember sunny days at the the back of the school field practising long jump – I was quite good, too, and got to run and jump for the school.
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beautiful metaphor. very nice work.
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Thank you, Victoria!
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haha I think you secretly had a go at the long jump again…on the beach….XXX
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I wish! xxx
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“Completed the leap.” Perfect.
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Thanks!
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I love the circle you form in your prose. It sounds as if you almost flew! Lovely haiku to finish.
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Thank you, Sarah!
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Lovely jump from your past to today’s Norfolk beaches. Beautiful write!
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Thank you, Bev!
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Beautifully worded haibun! Full circle, when you were young, dreaming of beaches and the future, and now dreaming of the past. Very sweet.
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Thank you so much!
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This is such a well knit haibun. The haiku beautifully sums up. I specially love the final line of the haiku.
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Thank you, Sumana!
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You have penned it beautifully🍂
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Thank you kindly!
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Love this!
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Thank you, Ivana!
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The beach dreams came true. That’s a nice tie from the past to the present.
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Love the metaphor of the leap! Very clever 🙂
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Thank you, Jilly!
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I enjoyed both of your jumps! Olympic caliber (or calibre)!
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Thank you, Charley!
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You just made the long jump sound so enjoyable, that wasn’t the case for me. Still it was exciting like you say to run a fast we can to the stage. Well written prose and haiku is nostalgic. Well done on the Haibun!
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Thank you!
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I love watching long jump, but I’ve always wondered how the repeated impact of sports like that affects the body as you age. I once nursed a well-known football player and in his 70’s he could hardly stand to get out of bed. Love the haiku.
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Thank you, Victoria! I wish I was as light and agile now as I was then.
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As long as my feet were on the ground I was fine 🙂 Love the haiku.
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Thank you! 😊
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