A
perfect
russet leaf
for her to press
between the leaves
of sonnets,
caught on her sweater,
tucked into her pocket,
gave her the words
she wrote
on
her
note
pad
of
new
po-
ems
.
Kim M. Russell, 2017
My response to Imaginary Garden with Real Toads Weekend Mini-Challenge: Out of Your Own Words
Magaly is our host this weekend and says that she hopes our days are dancing with words and wonder. She has been doing a lot of editing and, as she reread her work, many lines stayed with her, whispering to the muse, asking to be written into more, which is where today’s prompt has sprouted from.
Magaly would like us to write new poems that begin with a line out of our own words. The line can come from a poem, a story, a blog entry, a social media post; the origin doesn’t matter, as long as the words belong to us, and we have published them on a public platform before today. She also asks us to please add a link to the piece that birthed the line.
I took my line from a poem I posted at the end of last August, called ‘The Leaving’.
And your words dance and shine also
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Thank you 🙂
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A fine meditation on how the work evolves in us — the title says it all — and offers hope that the past is ever verdant and alive in us.
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Thanks Brendan!
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This is soo beautiful!❤️ “A perfect russet leaf for her to press between the leaves of sonnets caught on her sweater” … *swoooon*❤️
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Thanks Sanaa!
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I adore this. Beautiful movement.
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Thank you!
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A very sweet poem that brings up the falling of leaves and the turning of pages, thanks much. k.
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Thanks for reading and commenting!
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I love the image of the leaf between the leaves of sonnets.. I used to do that a lot when younger and still open books from my shelf to have old petals and leaves fall out.
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My grandmother was one for pressing flowers. I recently bought a little flower pressing kit as a birthday present for a friend.
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I love this title….truly lovely Kim!
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Thank you, Carrie!
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“to press
between the leaves
of sonnets” as they themselves become the sonnet. Lovely Kim
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Thank you, Debi.
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This is wonderful.
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Thank you, Jael.
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Welcome.
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I love the pressing between the leaves of sonnets, the tucking in the pocket….wonderful!
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Thank you, Sherry!
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I’m just tickled by your choice and by the way you developed it, Kim. I love poems that look like what they say. Such delicious structure.
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Thank you, Magaly. Every now and again I can’t resist writing a concrete/shape poem.
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the title is a poem in itself. Wonderful structure in this. leaves…
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Thank you, Toni! I might try this prompt again some time, maybe go back to a year ago to the day and see what I can find.
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Saved by the pad and pen. I worked a bit on the sonnet she would now make. Finish later?
I know it was a lovely poem your writer now has, saved in her book.
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Thanks Jim! There’s definitely another poem in there.
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Ah, more Excellence! 😎😎😎🥀🥀🥀
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A
perfect
russet leaf
for her to press
between the leaves
of sonnets
Oh that is so beautiful..
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Thank you so much, Susie!
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