The ocean sings a melancholy tune
with its infinite whispers of tide and moon.
Whiskey coloured waves wash and tumble sand,
where fishermen haul in, hand over hand,
a net of jelly fish and tangled mermaid tails,
shark fins and teeth, up to the whale-
backed dunes, where the season gives russet hair
a haughty flick and throws dead leaves into the air.
Trees bare branches to a huge coastal sky;
behind the grey, the simmering sun’s eye
closes its heavy lid, a wink to cold weather
in the bottom of the net with the bones of winter.
Kim M. Russell, 2017
My response to Imaginary Garden with Real Toads Camera FLASH!
Kerry offers a single image prompt and the challenge is wide open.
A poem such as this with its jaunty rhythm and rhyme takes a lot of work. Your descriptive writing is always a pleasure to read.
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Thank you, Kerry. I started it yesterday and left it for a while. When I came back to it early this morning, it seemed to write itself!
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My goodness the imagery here is absolutely stunning! Beautiful work done, Kim! 😀
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Thank you so much, Sanaa!😊
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All encompassing piece. The rhythm is fabulous as is the breadth of subject matter covered. The life of a fisherman in full.
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Thank you, Paul. I’m off for a walk but looking forward to some more reading later in. 🚢
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WoW just wow
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Thank you so much, Jane.
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I really love this, the rhythm are like those heavy waves… as well as that useless catch… I feel the weight of winter falling.
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Thank you, Bjorn!
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Brava.. 🥀🥀🥀🥀🥀🥀🥀
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Many thanks Dorna!
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You do a great work of capturing the image but also lending it some new life with your great description! Thanks for posting and viva la!
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Thanks Izy! Viva la!
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I can feel the waves, the energy… beautiful
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Thank you, Susie!
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This is so potent and lulling and magesterial and brutal. A whiff of cold winter sea. Love it.
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Thanks Brendan, I’m delighted you like it.
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The idea of the sun winking with a heavy lid to cold weather- you put it perfectly!
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Thank you, Viv! Wink!
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