thirsty for her love
a shimmering oasis
lips dry and salty
Kim M. Russell, 2018
My response to Carpe Diem #1345 The Story of the Young King of the Black Isles
Cruel Illusion
thirsty for her love
a shimmering oasis
lips dry and salty
Kim M. Russell, 2018
My response to Carpe Diem #1345 The Story of the Young King of the Black Isles
writing in north norfolk 
Sweet! 😎🥀
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Echoes of the lake here…I like how you tied them together.
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Thank you, Viv. It was a tricky prompt.
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It did my head in! I felt that the theme..’islands’ didn’t have much to do with the tale/title. I should have as Kristjaan . Anyway, I wrote 2 senryus to cover both theme and tale. But yours was really clever 🙂
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Great job, Kim.
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