Time is a constant artist:
a sculptor tracing years on skin
from the moment we began;
an artist reflecting colours
of spring, summer and autumn;
a playwright feeding us our lines;
a novelist unfolding chapters in our book.
Now we have time to pause
and marvel at the winter sun
composing poetry in our garden.
Kim M. Russell, 2018
My response to Imaginary Garden with Real Toads Get Listed: Landslide Month
Angie would like us to write a poem, a new creation about new beginnings, a special celebration or a milestone memory, using the word list ingredients she has provided. She wants us to use all four words from one of the lists. I chose the list with the words: pause, reflect, unfolding and years, to write about our anniversary next Tuesday.
Hi Kim! A happy anniversary in advance. A beautiful poem showing a beautiful journey. I look forward to reading many more chapters your lives (and poetry) unfolds.
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Thank you, Viv! xx
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A beautiful poem. Happy Anniversary Kim. 🙂
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Thank you so much!
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Happy Anniversary!
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This is such a wonderfully heartening poem, Kim!❤ I love the idea of time being “a playwright feeding us our lines; a novelist unfolding chapters in our book.” Happy Anniversary in advance 🙂 wishing you both a world of happiness.❤🥂
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Thank you so much, Sanaa! 🙂
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awwww……and awwwww again! Happy anniversary Kim and hubby. Thanks for making a poem for him, and to let us read about your milestone commemoration. Time IS a constant artist, and we DO get better with age. Thanks for planting this seed in our garden today. It is perfect and lovely and full of hope.
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Thanks Angie!
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Excellent tribute! 😎🥀🥀🥀🥀🥀
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Thank you, Dorna!
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Time as an artist – how marvelous! Happy Anniversary! Ours is coming up next year. I will think of this poem.
I chose the same list you did and ended up in a different place. Isn’t poetry grand?
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Thank you, Candy! I’m always amazed by the different responses. That’s why we’re so lucky to have poetry collectives like the Toads and dVerse!
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Oh, how I love the first line and this: “a playwright feeding us our lines” … Also the last two. Beautiful work. I can feel it … especially that sun I’m craving so badly.
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Thank you so much!
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Lovely poem, luv the pause of winter.
Happy Thursday
Much💝love
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Thanks Gillena! It’s Friday already, so I’m wishing you a wonderful weekend! Much love to you, too.
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kaykuala
and marvel at the winter sun
composing poetry in our garden.
How nice to have such a privilege, a warm Winter sun to allow one to be outdoors!
Hank
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Congratulations on the anniversary, especially as it sounds as though you are both poets! What a beautiful warm feeling this poem has.
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Thank you, Robin! David is a poet – he used to write songs.
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This is just perfect for the occasion. Congrats, Kim!
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I don’t know where my comment went. I love this poem. A constant artist….you come us with such amazing lines and poems. Beautiful the years you two have spent together. Congratulations to you two on Tuesday. Hugs.
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Thank you, Toni! I’m just about to go off-line for a few days. I’ll see you on here when I’m back. Hugs 😊
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Happy Anniversary! I love this poem!
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Thank you, Sherry!
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This TIME it is you who have painted such a picture with words and years and the wisdom earned. Happy Anniversary both x
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Happy Anniversary!! Oh the beauty life can write into silver is such a blessing. In a little over two years my husband and I will be celebrating our 50th.
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Congrats on the anniversary, and what a perfect topic. Love the first lines…
Time is a constant artist:
a sculptor tracing years on skin
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Congratulations on your upcoming anniversary, Kim, and how beautifully you described the passing of time and how it enriches our lives…love it! Enjoy your special day…sweet photo. xo
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Thank you very much!
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Enjoy your “pausing” to enjoy your day! Lovely photo!
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Thank you, Margaret! Tomorrow’s the day 😊
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