The memory is black and white
and fading at the edges,
glimpsed through a peephole of time.
She recalls the creak and scratch
of wooden planks and his straw hat,
the candy floss awe of the crowd inside,
and the flap of canvas above their heads.
That’s enough when you can’t afford a ticket
but you can feel the jump of his heart
and the echo of his long-dead heat.
Kim M. Russell, 2018

My response to Imaginary Garden with Real Toads Camera FLASH!
Kerry says it’s time to strike a pose again. As always, our photographic challenge for February comes with a wide angle and any filter of our choosing.
You took me right into the picture, like a memory relived again.
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Thank you, Kerry!
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I think the memory of being on the outside is always stronger than the bliss of being selected to be inside…
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I think you’re right, Bjorn.
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Superb Kim – thumping with memories, I can imagine the jump and feel of his heart.
Anna :o]
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Thank you, Anna! 🌞
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Nice response Kim. You just dive headlong into the image and came up with magic. Thanks for dropping by to read mine
much love…
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Thank you, Gillena. Much love to you too 😊
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The mories of early years – so sweet and poignant this is. “and the echo of his long-dead heat.” This line really resonates with me.
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🙂
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Oh, wow. This gave me chills:
“but you can feel the jump of his heart
and the echo of his long-dead heat”
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Thank you!
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“She recalls the creak and scratch of wooden planks and his straw hat, the candy floss awe of the crowd inside, and the flap of canvas above their heads”.. this is so vividly portayed!💖
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Thank you, Sanaa!
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What a sweet-romantic glimpse.. 😎🥀😎🥀
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Thank you, Dorna! 🙂
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Love this flashback … love!
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Thank you, Helen!
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Such an emotive flashback… I’m write there in it.
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Thanks Susie.
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