Sitting on the bottom step…

I wondered what lurked in the landing’s shadows.
I listened to the creak of breathing wood
and the wash of my imagination’s shallows.
I whispered to the upstairs ghosts
mollifying volleys of hallos
and showers of secrets and prayers –
just making sure they stayed upstairs.

Kim M. Russell, 2018

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My response to Imaginary Garden with Real Toads Bits of Inspiration: Stairs

This Thursday Susie is inspiring us to write new poems about stairways with inspiration from Led Zeppelin, some very nice images and quotes.

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27 thoughts on “Sitting on the bottom step…

  1. kaykuala

    I whispered to the upstairs ghosts
    just making sure they stayed upstairs.

    In life, it is good to ensure our position is strong vis-a-vis to other contending elements before proceeding onwards to other bigger things. Agreed! Great principle to follow, Kim!

    Hank

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  2. A warning, a plea, a hope and a prayer …. I like how this flows …. yet, strangely, or maybe not – the way you’ve captured the tension, just the edge of reason, but somehow, it doesn’t feel like a threatening scenario. It’s your word choices Kim 🙂 It’s well done – just plays with the “tinkling in the mind” of feeling slightly troubled – the imagination toying, but not quite running away in hysteria. Yup – perfectly penned 🙂

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  3. Well your ghosts seemed friendly enough but probably a bit over the top as I suppose I would be if I was one with range of operation limited to cupboards and stairs. Trouble is if you do sit own and talk to them will they take advantage of you? Sshh! I have just heard a creak, I let you know later. As you can see I really enjoyed your piece.

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  4. I liked your poem. I also clicked the like button but for some reason when I came back my like is no longer showing, not sure why. Just letting you know because you may have more likes than you think but they may not be sticking.

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