You can keep your bouquets
of pungent lilies and blushing roses,
cultivated beauty intertwined.
What I would like is delicate frills,
the brilliance of daffodils:
a natural bunch of sunshine.
Their trumpets trill the breath of spring,
their breeze-swept petals fluttering,
their yellow flowers are a welcome sign
of the end of wintry blasts,
warmer weather’s here at last
to celebrate the season’s prime.
Kim M. Russell, 2018
My response to dVerse Poets Pub Poetics: Sunny-Side Up! also linked to Imaginary Garden with Real Toads Tuesday Platform
Lillian is hosting this week’s Poetics from Bermuda. She reminds us that the clocks have sprung ahead in the US (and in the UK) and is looking forward to spring flowers and weather.
She has shared a few images to spur our imagination and asks us to pick one of the images, copy and paste to our sites, and write poems motivated by the image. Any form, any length. She wants us to put a spring in our step and in our words.
“a natural bunch of sunshine” THEE perfect line to describe daffodils! After sunflowers, these are my favorite blooms. But of course. When I think about it, they are both a perfect bloom of sunshine 🙂
Thanks for posting, Kim. Worked out well to shift our prompts…loved the egg prompt 🙂
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Tulips are my most favourite glowers of all but daffodils come a very close second. They are the epitome of spring. It was a job deciding which picture to choose – and then my poem suddenly grew legs of its own and the choice was no longer mine! 🙂
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Luv the hankering to natures bouquets of sunshine and Spring aspects
much love…
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Thank you, Gillena! I hope you have sunshine flowers to brighten up your day!
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“a natural bunch of sunshine” … Goodness, that is a striking image!
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Thank you, Shawna!
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I like the “frills”, “daffodils” and “trill” rhymes.
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Thanks Frank!
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Yes, yellow flowers (I’ve been told) symbolise joy!
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Especially after a long winter!
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LOL
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We chose the same photo Kim ~ Love your: a natural bunch of sunshine. ~ I am out there welcoming the first sight of spring flowers ~
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Daffodils have opened in many place, just not our garden yet. They make me wait every year!
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I love, ‘brilliance of daffodils’. It made me smile, and believe in Spring again!
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Daffodils are definitely sunshine embodied in petals! The first call of spring…
dwight
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Yes, when the daffodils are here? I know it is Spring!
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“delicate frills, natural sunshine” …. Oh, welcome Spring!
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You can definitely keep the lilies. They’re pretty, but the smell makes me gag. It reminds me of a funeral home.
Bring on the daffodils! They don’t have much of a smell that I can detect, and they’re kind of a fun flower.
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Lilies are serious and mournful – daffodils cheer me up 🙂
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Gorgeous bouquet you have crafted here.
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Thank you, Brendan!
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“the brilliance of daffodils: a natural bunch of sunshine”… sigh yes💖 that it truly is 😊
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Nothing says spring like a daffodil.
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Fantabulous scenes.. 😎🥀😎🥀😎🥀😎🥀😎🥀
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Thank goodness. ..they remind us of the end of wintry blast. A happy time…at last.
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Love the cheerfulness of the daffodils… let them come I love their smile
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True.. What Good Are
Cut FLoWeRS..
NoW aS
Photos
Last forever
online with SMiLES
THaT wHo NeVeR WiLT
DiGiTaL FLoWeRS NeVeR STiNK
GaRDeNS
FLoWeR
STiLL
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ReaL LoVENoW..:)
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The daffodils in my garden ware making me wait – or maybe they’re waiting for the snowdrops to wilt 🙂
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SMiLes.. Garden
Ware wearing
Out in
Florida
Springs
Year
‘Round..:)
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Such a cheery bouquet of sunshine!
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Thank you, Lynn! Like Wordsworth, I love to see crowds of them bobbing their heads in fields, gardens and by paths and roadsides. We have a mile-long stretch of daffs that flank a road leading from one local village to the next. I wrote about it a year or so ago. They do tractor rides up and down the road over Easter!
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How wonderful…nothing like that here!
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yellow flowers are the best aren’t they!
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I love daffodils and I love your write!! Yellow is my favorite color!
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“a natural bunch of sunshine” – what a wonderful line!
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Thank you, Jo!
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