her eyes are broken
lozenges of shifting glass
patterns of rainbows
Kim M. Russell, 2018
My response to Poets United Midweek Motif: Vision
Kaleidoscope Vision
her eyes are broken
lozenges of shifting glass
patterns of rainbows
Kim M. Russell, 2018
My response to Poets United Midweek Motif: Vision
writing in north norfolk 
there is great depth to this.. and done in so few words.. lovely write
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Thank you, Robert.
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Such Psychedelic experience, no doubt. 😎🥀😎🥀😎🥀😎🥀😎🥀
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Another interesting interpretation!
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I just thank time and existence for being permitted to see so many of Life’s facets in all its Creative Forms. And then to be able to share with others, Awesome Experience, no doubt. (@–>–)
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Right on. 🙂
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Great Haiku Kim!
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Thank you!
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Very cool.
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Thank you, Sherry.
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Love this. Original and clever.
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Love it.
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Thank you, Rosemary!
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I thought I left a comment earlier! Oh, I was wondering just what made the eyes so unique and what one could see through those eyes. Other dimensions, I imagine.
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It’s interesting to read all the interpretations, Susan.
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I love “lozenges of shifting glass”.
And I wonder if her eyes are broken or just different.
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That is for the reader to work out!
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Something needs to be broken for kaleidoscopic vision. Love this.
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Thank you, Sumana.
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Less is definitely more here
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Thank you, Jae.
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I adore haiku and yours is lovely, Kim! As Jae says, less is more.
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Thank you, Bekkie!
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Luv her healing vision of earth. We do need this hope
Much🌼love
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Very clever Kim – I like it a lot!
Anna :o]
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Thank you, Anna!
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