pulses quicken at fog-muffled
footsteps on the cobbles.
Along the soot-soaked lanes,
pawn shops and tenements topple,
and blackened windows
weep tears of grime.
They see it all: every good deed
and every murderous crime,
pickpockets, pimps and paupers,
desperate drabs and abused daughters.
The dross of life oozes, sobbing and mumbling
from the murky shadows between the crumbling –
but there’s no escape for those who’ve been scarred
by a sentence spent in Bleeding Heart Yard.
Kim M. Russell, 29th May 2018

My response to dVerse Poets Pub Poetics: Street Names, also linked to Imaginary Garden with Real Toads Tuesday Platform
Our host this Tuesday is Sarah, who wants us to think about street names. She says that they’ve always interested her and she particularly likes those names that capture a fragment of local history that would otherwise be lost, and are often strange, quirky and inspirational. It’s these names that she wants us to use as inspiration for our poems.
Sarah has given us two lists of street names, some from her local towns and some from London, and would like us to imagine what the street is like, who might live there and how the name came about. She asks us to be whimsical, dark, quirky, funny and mysterious!
This feels like how Dickens described the streets in Bleak House… or the places where Jack the ripper was hunting… splendid use of rhymes.
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Thank you, Bjorn!
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Oh, very dark and VERY Dickensian. All life is there, lurking in the shadows.
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It brought Quilp to mind, the ‘little hunchy villain and a monster’ from The Old Curiosity Shop, especially when he kisses Little Nell. “Ah!” said the dwarf, smacking his lips, “what a nice kiss that was – just upon the rosy part.”
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Makes you shudder!
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Another good one! I agree with the Dickensian aspect—you even remembered the fog 🙂
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I’m a bit of a Dickens fan 😉
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It shows 🙂
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Wow. I wonder if this street was in the part of Clerkenwell in the 1870’s, part of Dicken’s writing. You describe this very well. Oh the parts of London that used to be – Whitechapel, Bethnal Green…the sorrows those walls could tell about. A great use of rhymes.
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Thanks Toni. Bleeding Heart Yard is in Farringdon.
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Deliciously dark and enticing! 💜 I too was reminded of Dickens 😊
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Thank you, Sanaa! 💟
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I see I wasn’t alone in thinking about Dickens when I read this. I’m also a fan of how you used alliteration and vivid words here. It rounded out the piece beautifully.
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Thanks Rommy.
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Very Dickensian — excellent writing!
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Thank you, Jo!
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Chilling and captivating and like some others have said has a Dickens feel to it. Lovely writing Kim!
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Thank you so much, Carrie!
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This nod to Dickens is splendid! Described in glorious grimy detail.
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Thank you, Viv, I’m a huge Dickens fan. 🙂
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I can see that!😀
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That last line was so gripping. It really made the rest of the poem pop!
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Thank you, Walter – or is it Mark?
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It really is, ha ha, (Mark or Walter). The rhyming stanza made it all stand out for me. I wrote a longer response, but i pushed the cookies thing when it popped up and it dumped it my comment. Arrgh, really loved the description of Old London
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A great picture of this street! Loved the windows bleeding grime!!
Dwight
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Thanks Dwight!
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Ah, such truth in those closing lines!
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Thank you, Sherry!
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That is so vivid and real…!
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Thank you, Rajani!
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I liked the no escape and sentence spent in this Yard.
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Thank you, Frank.
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What a good job you did with the prompt!!
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Thank you, Annell!
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I especially liked ‘pulses quicken at fog-muffled footsteps on the cobbles’. Great imagery throughout, you captured bleak.
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Luckily, London isn’t as fog-bound as it was back then when people were killed by it. Up here in North Norfolk we get a lot of rolling sea fog and mist.
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Hauntingly dark and mysterious – the imagery let me sneak a peek of another time and place.
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I’m do pleased it too you there. Thank you!
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This is not so whimsical as it is dark, but it surely does make one think. There are others still in such situations as you imagined on Bleeding Heart Yard. Bleeding Heart Yard is less than a half mile to the south of the Charles Dickens Museum at 48 Doughty St (London). All that is about four miles south of St. John’s Wood where the Beatles hung out and did their recording. Paul McCartney’s London house is also in St. John’s Wood, that is where we stayed with out daughter and family when we would stay London.
Thank you, Kim, for writing of this. I may have been there but it wasn’t outstanding or I would have remembered.
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Apparently there’s a popular restaurant in Bleeding Heart Yard but I’d not heard of it before. From what I remember, it’s tucked away. It’s said to be haunted and it does have a creepy feel to it – if you can find it!
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