paulownia leaves
dappling dusty mountain tracks
a ray of sunlight
paulownia leaves
heart-shaped parasols quiver
a young girl’s dowry
dappling dusty mountain tracks
saplings are dancing
embracing the breeze
a ray of sunlight
painting clouds red and purple
twilit peak glows
Kim M. Russell, 1st July 2018

My response to Carpe Diem Weekend Meditation #40 Troiku Challenge “a distant mountain”
This weekend we have another Troiku Challenge, in which we create a fusion haiku from two given haiku and then create a Troiku from the fusion haiku. The given haiku are by Takahama Kyoshi (1874–1959):
a distant mountain
seen in the sunlight:
a desolate field
a leaf of a paulownia tree
has fallen
in the sunlight
© Takahama Kyoshi (Tr. Katsuya Hiromoto)
Love the troiku form! You did it great justice.
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Thank you, Charley.
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You are welcome!
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Nicely done response for this challenging challenge.
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Wow .. I am speechless
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Thank you, Kristjaan.
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Another round of thee Fantastic! (@–>–)
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🙂
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