one apple, alone
in the abandoned orchard
reddens for winter Patrick Blanche (Tr. Michael R. Burch)
fading drone of the last wasps
drunk on sadness of sugar Kim M. Russell, 9th September 2018

My response to Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge Chained Together III: An Apple, Alone
Today our challenge is to create a Tan Renga with a haiku written by the French haiku-poet Patrick Blanche. Here’s the French version:
Une pomme, seul
dans le verger abandonné
rougissent pour l’hiver
Patrick Blanche
Happydrunk bee
Nice response Kim
much love…
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Such A Scrumptious Delight! (@–>–) (@–>–)
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Thank you, Dorna! 🙂 xxx
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this has that melancholy fall feel. I love it, Kim!
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Thank you, Candy!
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Delicious indeed!
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Awesome but with a sad undertone, but … that’s the emotion of autumn.
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