tender blossoms fall
sweet perfume drifts on the breeze
memories of peace Kim M. Russell, 11 September 2018
pear tree in full bloom on a battlefield
collapsed house becomes beautiful again Shiki (re-worked by Chèvrefeuille)
My response to Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge Chained Together III: pear tree in bloom
Today we have another Hineri Tan Renga Challenge, in which we are challenged to create the first stanza (hokku) of a Tan Renga inspired by a given second stanza stanza, a quotation from Masaoka Shiki, which has been reworked for this challenge:
writing in north norfolk 
Yours leads beautifully into the response.
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Thank you, Ken.
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Brava… (@–>–) (@–>–)
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Thank you, Dorna!
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Well this one flows like a river into that second stanza. Very nicely done.
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Thanks so much, Kristjaan!
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