I –
not thinking of you
this pronoun’s focus is me
egotistical
write –
purple ink flowing
with the movement of a pen
stubborn words fight back
on –
what lies between
the switching of on and off
no prepositions
these –
not those this or that
materialist humans
always possession
spindrift –
spat from cresting waves
Leucothea’s laundry’s clean
spinning on a gale
pages –
a blank collection
no words on which to hang them
poems are waiting
Kim M. Russell, 28th May 2026

For the last Meeting the Bar of May2026, at the dVerse Poets Pub we are taking a fine line down with Laura.
Laura says that poets and painters define the lyrical line, which is a fundamental element in our art, in much the same way and yet it is rendered so very differently, to ‘convey emotion, movement, and energy…characterized by their fluid, expressive, and dynamic quality’.
As examples of poems about definition, Laura has shared Cynthia Hogue’s poem, ‘to label something something’ and a poem by Laura Da, ‘The Meadow Views: Sword and Symbolic History.
Our challenge is to take a lyrical line and define it word by word in an acrostic. We should choose one of the given lines from the most lyrical poet, Dylan Thomas OR take a favourite line from our own poetry (and link or reference it). We should write each word alongside its definition, which can be any style we choose, such as an American sentence, a haiku, a triplet, forgetting the exactitude of the dictionary definition and letting our imagination wander through each meaning, by association, by sound, by interpretation, by what it means to us.
I chose ‘I write on these spindrift pages’.
lovely Kim – ‘poems are waiting’ on these associations and yes you found one!!
p.s. I know how much you like Dylan Thomas and when picking the prompt lines I thought of you with this one!
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Thank you for the lovely comment, Laura, and for thinking of me. I’ve loved Dylan Thomas since I was in the lower sixth – Duffy and Heaney came much later.
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This is so lovely, Kim. Wonderful definitions and “I” and “pages” stand out!
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Thank you very much, Punam.
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My pleasure, Kim.
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This is lovely, Kim. I love your poetic definitions!
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Thank you, Colleen!
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What a treat, Kim, especially as we chose the same line! I especially love your fanciful definition of spindrift and the promise of waiting poems.
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Thank you kindly, Dora.
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My pleasure, Kim.
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Kim, your poem made me think of cryptic crossword puzzle clues! I like the brevity you’ve achieved here too. Nicely done 👏
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Thank you, Shaun. I enjoy cryptic puzzles, although the one in the Times stumps me.
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Wonderful Kim, I really liked this one
:
spindrift –
spat from cresting waves
Leucothea’s laundry’s clean
spinning on a gale
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Thanks so much, Dianne.
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I really loved the ending in this poem… the possibilites of blank pages.
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Thank you, Björn.
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Your words flow so freely, Kim. I love each word!
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Thank you very much, Colleen!
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I love your purple ink especially – such a confident and assured write – where I could clearly hear your voice – Jae
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Thank you so much, Jae.
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One of my favourite lines of poetry, ever. I love what you’ve done with it.
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Thank you very much, Rosemary.
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👏👏👏
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started! ⭐️ this is the like it won’t let me add. these:-materialist humansalways possession This makes so much sense to me. 🤣 thanks Kim
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Thank you so much, Selma!
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My pleasure. Always.
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