clouds and waves
carry my dreams away
tugging my anchor Dolores
my heart is a boat adrift
on an unforgiving sea Kim M. Russell, 17th September 2018

My response to Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge Chained Together III: clouds and waves
Today we have a haiku by Dolores of Ada’s Poetry Alcove, which was inspired by a poem by Rabindranath Tagore as featured in one of our recent weekend meditations. Our task is to add a second two-line stanza in order to complete the Tan Renga.
You’ve made the haiku into an even stronger tanka, Kim.
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Thanks so much, Ken.
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🙂
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Nice tan renga Kim
Much💙🌦love
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Than k you, Gillena! Much love 🙂
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Oh, the Marvelous angst of love… (@–>–)
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😊
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Strong emotions in your continuation.
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Thank you, Kristjaan.
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