the end of the day
the trailing threads of sunset
stained with pungent smoke Kim M. Russell, 17th September 2018
haunted valley deep in the mountains
the dim glow of a campfire Chèvrefeuille

My response to Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge 2018 Chained Together III: the dim glow of a campfire
Today we have another episode of the Hineri feature, in which we are given the second stanza of approximately fourteen syllables over two lines. This time it is based on a quotation from a Japanese novelist:
Haunted valley deep in the mountains
The dim glow of a campfire
© Chèvrefeuille
Ah, another Beautiful poem! (@–>–)
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Thank you, Dorna! 😊🌞🌸
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“the trailing threads of sunset”
~ stunning line Kim!
lovely haiku – tan renga 🙂
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Thank you, Pat! 🙂
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A lovely image of endings, painted in your hokku Kim
much love…
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Thank you, Gillena! x
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Wonderfully crafted.
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Thank you so much, Kristjaan.
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