summer’s night
the tree spirit follows in
the sound of wooden shoes
branches lace the moonlit sky
creaking with the weight of leaves
day after day
barley ripens
a singing skylark
weightless on a floating breeze
stew simmering in the pot
rice paddy sparrows
shelter in the tea plants
when chased away
cool feet below the bushes
hot hands pluck golden flushes
begonia flowers
blooming in the colours
of a watermelon
the sun rising on the tongue
sweetness drips from juicy lips
a bamboo shoot
when I was a child it was
fun to sketch
the curve of a simple leaf
vertical lines of a stem
clapping my hands
the echo as it dawns
of a summer moon
remembering mother’s face
and the clicking of her shoes
Basho Kim M. Russell, 7th October 2018

My response to Carpe Diem Weekend Meditation #53 Renga with Basho #10: Summer’s Night
In the first of Carpe Diem’s anniversary month of weekend meditations, we are creating a ‘Renga with Basho’ episode with a twist. We have six of Basho’s haiku, one of which must be used as the hokku (the one which starts with ‘summer’s night’) and we decide the order of the other five . The goal is to add two-line stanzas of approximately 14 syllables to complete the renga. The closing stanza, the ageku, closes the chain by linking to the hokku. The haiku have been translated by Jane Reichhold and taken from Basho, the Complete Haiku.
Nicely done, with a complete cycle, Kim.
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Thank you, Ken!
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Fabulous! (@–>–)
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Thank you, Dorna! 🌞
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Beautiful writing. You are really good at this!
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Thank you!
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Impressive chain of tan renga, Kim…some rhyme as well, very pleasing series.
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Thank you, Lynn!
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Better than a lot of us nice poem
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Chapeau … a wonderful renga.
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Thank you, Kristjaan!
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