between fall and swirl
of russet and golden leaves
a sudden cloudburst
Kim M. Russell, 16th November 2018
My response to Carpe Diem #1546 Abstract Autumn
Today our challenge is to think outside the box and create Japanese poetry from a visual prompt of abstract art: an autumn painting in which we cannot see recognisable visual objects but, through the colours, know immediately that the painting has to do with autumn.
writing in north norfolk 
Yes i can understand fully the rain intrusion.
Thanks for dropping by my blog Kim
Much❤💛❤love
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I was completely pulled in by the orange, so it’s great that you brought the rain into this.
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It was the blue that I noticed first!
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I like the sudden intrusion of the cloudburst. Your haiku really captures that fleeting, changing feeling of autumn.
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Thank you, Suzanne.
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Excellent scenes! (@–>–)
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Thank you, Dorna! 🙂
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This is gorgeous!
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Thank you so much!
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