in vacant windows
no chintzy drapes or roses
just my reflection
staring back from the darkness
or a ghostly resident
Kim M. Russell, 27th November 2018

My response to Carpe Diem #1554 Haunted Houses (modern kigo)
Today’s modern kigo, ‘haunted houses’, has been taken from Jane Reichhold’s Dictionary of Haiku, from the section autumn and the sub-section autumn occasions. Our challenge is to create a haibun, haiku or other Japanese poetry form inspired by the following haiku by Jane Reichhold:
deserted house
wild roses still have a view
of the remote coast
vacant stares
from the vacant house
no one looks
Jane Reichhold
Luv the ‘what if’ left to the reader’s imagination.
Happy you dropped by my blog today Kim
Much☺🔷️☺love
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Thank you, Gillena! Much love and have a great middle-of-the-week 🙂
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wow!
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I’m glad you like it!
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Scary! Love your Haiku.
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Thank you, Donna!
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Ah, such Superbness! (@–>–) (@–>–) (@–>–)
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Thank you, Dorna! 🙂
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