winter dawn
sounds of blowing snow
sleeping birds
bare branches bough with the weight
whiteness blankets the landscape
spots of blue
varying the light to fit
tracks in the snow
tiny pools of melted ice
formed in the heat of the hunt
frost sharp air
cut into pieces by sunshine
sparkling on snow
burgeoning green snowdrop shoots
hope scattered among crystals
ocean sunset
staying by the window
’till the color sinks
torn between snow’s evening blush
and orange glow of embers
before one star
beams from the lighthouse
search the sky
somewhere a soul is rescued
somewhere a wish is fulfilled
cold winds
rounding snow-capped peaks
a full moon
bows to the strength of branches
holding up a heavy sky
Jane Reichhold Kim M. Russell, 15th January 2019

My response to Carpe Diem #1584 Winter Renga With Jane Reichhold — spots of blue
Today we have six modern kigo to work with: air, dawn, moon, stars, first light and sunset, all of which have been taken from Jane Reichhold’s Saijiki A Dictionary of Haiku, from the section Winter, subsection Celestial. The challenge is to create a renga with Jane Reichhold from six of her haiku.
Ah! Such Excellence! (@—>–)
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Thank you, Dorna! xx
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Beautifully penned!!!!
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Thank you!
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