the cold wintry wind
is blowing so hard that
the sun sinks into the ocean Soseki
waves infused with molten gold
rage against a stormy sky Kim M. Russell, 5th February 2019

My response to Carpe Diem #1600 Tan Renga Challenge Month 2019 (4) cold wintry wind
In the 1600th regular episode of Carpe Diem’s Haiku Kai, we have a classical haiku by Natsume Soseki. Our challenge is to add a second stanza of two lines to create a tan renga.
Sweet Scenes! (@—>—)
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Nice melding of waves and sun.
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Thanks Ken.
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