the crow has flown away;
swaying in the evening sun,
a leafless tree
Natsume Soseki
an abandoned empty nest
and a single black feather
Kim M. Russell, 26th February 2019
My response to Carpe Diem #1614 Tan Renga Challenge Month 2019 (18) free styling
Today’s challenge is to use haiku of our own choice, which can written by a classical or non-classical haiku poet, but our own, and create Tan Renga with them, if possible explaining why we chose the haiku.
The haiku I have chosen is by Natsume Soseki; it captures beautifully the moment just after a crow has taken flight from a branch and makes me feel that the tree misses its company.
Ah, such Fabulousness. (@—>—) (@—>—)
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This shows how leafless could be lifeless.
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Thank you, Ken.
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Stunning completion.
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Thank you! 🙂
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Awesome choice Kim and you created a wonderful Tan Renga. A tribute to Soseki.
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