late summer
alone on the beach
with only tracks Jane Reichhold
warm sand rubs between tired toes
enticed by the wash of tide
seagulls overhead
melancholy messages
scribbled in the sky
returning them to sender
below on the empty beach Kim M. Russell, 16th May 2019

My response to Carpe Diem #1664 Tan Renga Challenge Month May 2019 (11) Tan Renga Hineri: Only Tracks
Today our challenge is to create a Tan Renga Hineri, which means adding a minimum of three and a maximum of five stanzas to a given haiku. We should try to create a ‘short story’ and close the chain with an ‘ageku’ that refers to the given stanza.
Love the closing lines.
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Thank you!
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Fabulous! (@—>—)
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Thank you, Dorna! 😊
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