even old men
open their eyes to New Year
cherry blossoms
Kim M. Russell, 19th May 2019

My response to Carpe Diem Weekend Meditation #85 Photo-shopping Haiku (2) Cherry Blossom
For this weekend’s meditation we have another episode of the new feature: ‘Photo-Shopping Haiku’, in which we tweak or make a little change to a given haiku to make it a ‘better version of itself’. The given haiku (or is it a senryu?) is a tricky one:
even an old man
has New Year’s eyes…
cherry blossoms
Kobayashi Issa (Tr. David G. Lanoue)
fantastic kim
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Thank you.
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I think you’re right…it’s a senryu. I like how you “photo-shopped” it, Kim!
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Thank you, Lynn!
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Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
#Haiku Happenings #8: Kim Russell’s latest haiku for Carpe Diem!
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Cheers Frank!
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😇
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Again, simply Marvelous! (@—>—)
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Thanks Dorna! 🙂
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Same thoughts.
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Great minds…
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Very lovely. The picture was a good choice too!
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🙂
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Nice “photo shopped” ku you kept all the salient issues, yet you did it your way
much love…
P.S. mine is #10 at the Linky
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Thank you, Gillena. I’ll be along to read shortly. 😉
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Very subtle, and well done, Kim.
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Thanks Ken.
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What a fantastic view!
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