If I could
dance like the universe,
I hope I would
be partnered with planets,
I’d execute a perfect
grand jete
over shooting stars,
or tread a measure
on the surface of Mars,
I imagine I would
whirl and shoot through space,
and explode
into uncountable atoms,
a sparkling star with a smiling face.
Kim M. Russell, 24th July 2019

My response to Poets United Midweek Motif: Dance
Sumana is our host this Wednesday with extracts from lyrics, quotations and poems about dance. She says the whole universe is in a dance mode and is interested to see where we find that rhythm and beat to capture in our new poems. She suggests it might be in the flow of a river; in rolling of waves; in raindrops; in the rhythm of seasons, day and night; in the flight of a bird; in birth; in death; in a stage performance.
Sumana reminds us that there are numerous forms / types of dance to write about as well as well-known dancers. She says we could even write about dance costumes, props, masks and shoes.
To be a cosmic dancer is such a fascinating idea! Grand !
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Thank you, Sumana!
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This is wonderful. As I read, I danced with you among the stars.
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Thank you, Sherry.
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Lovely poem. I would do the line dance from Saturday Night Fever out among the stars!
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😊
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How joyful is this!
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Thanks Sarah!
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Dancing with the planets sounds like invigorating exercise!
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🙂
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The energy in your poem is contageous! Wheeeeeeee ……
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🙂
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oh that’s beautiful and magical I could see myself jump over shooting stars
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Thank you, Marja!
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Such a whirling turn through the galaxy. I loved the ending.
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Thank you, Lori!
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Preferably I would prefer it if the bits in space didn’t jiggle about too much but just continue on without too much disturbance to our Earth. Humans should not dance around in space all the while they can’t manage their own planet wisely. Your poem however is beautiful and so well written.
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Thank you, Robin. I agree with you about humans leaving the rest space alone after making a mess of Earth.
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Partnered with planets! I’d like that dance. (K)
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Thank you, Kerfe. By the way, congratulations on your excellent poem in Visual Verse!
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And the same to you! I always like seeing and reading the names I know.
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Even to imagine this sets the spirit dancing! Thank you.
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Dancing through the stars and smiling, cant get better than that
Much❤love
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Thank you Gillena. ❤
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😍😍
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🤓
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How perfectly this poem matches the artwork. I like the direction you took in this.
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Thank you, Sara.
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Wow, that’s a spectacular dance! Love this your response to the prompt.
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Thank you so much, Khaya!
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It was quite beautiful and inspiring! I really liked it!
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Thank you for reading and commenting!
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