a crimson leaf twirls
among windfalls and mist
the woods are rusting
Kim M. Russell, 20th January 2020

My response to Carpe Diem #1800 New Beginnings: first leaf falling
We have passed the half-way mark in our month of ‘New Beginnings’ and today our challenge is to create Japanese poetry on the theme of ‘first leaf falling. Autumn is my favourite season.
kaykuala
the woods are rusting
A clever way of describing the golden colors of falling Autumn leaves, Kim!
Hank
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Thank you so much, Hank!
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So lovely!
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🙂
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Love the last line especially!
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Cheers Janice!
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