in love and conflict
edit the mood with rhythm
and punctuation
Kim M. Russell, 29th July 2020
My response to Poets and Storytellers United Weekly Scribblings #30: Writing as a Metaphor for Living
This Wednesday, Magaly is hosting from New York, where things are hot, hoping we are ready to play with cool words. For today’s prompt, she has a new word list:
allusion, conflict, edit, fiction, grammar, mood, pace, plot, poetry, prose, punctuation, rhythm, and stanza.
Magaly invites us to write new poetry or prose which includes three or more of the actual words, or derivatives of them, which should be part of our contributions. She says we can use them literally or figuratively, make our pieces about writing or living, let our themes be bleak or bright or whatever feels just right.
I chose conflict, edit, mood, punctuation and rhythm.
Perfectly said!
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Thanks Viv!
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🙂
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Short, sweet and perfect!!
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Thank you!
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Even so, one is easier than the other.
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LOL, I love how clever this is. Use the gifts of rhythm and punctuation wisely, dear gentlefolk.
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Thank you, Rommy!
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Advice to live by!
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If only I followed my own advice…
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Clear and concisely editing the list of words!
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Clear and concise editing of the word list!
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Thank you, Bev!
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“Oh, yeah!” Just so you know, that’s exactly what my delight and I screamed when I read your senryu. I so love when a senryu says all what it wants and more, when it says it cleverly and efficiently. And the fact that that words are true also adds to the yumminess.
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🤓
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Hey, Kim, this is cute!!
Dots and dashes in Morse Code
Binary love notes
..
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Thank you, Jim!
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Gorgeously rendered, Kim! 💝 I will remember these wise words whenever in conflict 🥰 🥰
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Thank you, Sanaa! ❤
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OMGingly GOOOOOOD!!
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Why, thanks Ron!
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Certainly, for in both cases how you express yourself makes all the difference.
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Ha! A brevity of truth!
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🙂
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I can’t help but play devil’s advocate and wonder what an unedited mood would look like.
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Good question, possibly very intense.😊
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That is quite wise — I like the idea of that punctuation for some pause, which is exactly what we need many times. A lovely senryu, Kim!
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Thank you, Anmol!
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pure genius!
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Thank you, Margaret!
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