‘I knew we had a ghost,’ the writer said from her armchair piled with cushions, feet warming by the fire.
‘How’s that?’
‘When we moved in, neighbours told me about a soldier who was killed in the Great War but returned to watch over his daughter, to whom he told stories. She became a writer, but died in childbirth, in the house where she grew up.’
‘Are you related?’
‘We bought the house from her husband, our first home as newlyweds. I wasn’t a writer then. One day, I sat down at the table, preparing to write a letter, when I felt the pen in my hand forming words on blank paper. I wrote for hours. I remember telling my husband, “Reading what I have just written, I now believe the neighbours. We have a ghost in our house, but what a kind one!”’
Kim M. Russell, 7th December 2020

My response to dVerse Poets Pub Prosery: Some Prosery Cheer
Lillian is back with this Monday’s Prosery, which she has started with an emphatic definition and reminder that Prosery is a piece of short prose of no more than 144 words that includes a given line from a poem. She continues with a lovely explanation of the line she chose and how she chose it.
Lillian tells us that on the day she wrote this prompt, she took out Louise Gluck’s Faithful and Virtuous Night, which her son gave her for Christmas 2015 and is very special to her. As she ‘haphazardly flipped it open’, she was presented with a poem ‘Afterward’, which starts with our prompt line: “Reading what I have just written, I now believe”.
It’s coming on Christmas so, in keeping with tradition, what else could I write but a ghost story?
Image: Writing Woman by Pierre Bonnard (3 October 1867 – 23 January 1947)
Oh my….a ghost that takes control of the pen! I like this tale….we had friends who swore they had a poltergeist in their house! 🙂
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Thank you, Lill! I’ve written a few stories about automatic writing and several more about ghosts, some of them friendly. My children’s novel, Joe and Nelly, has a friendly ghost.
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How strange! We had similar stories. Similar ghosts 🙂
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Poetic synchronisation, Jane! Possibly another form of automatic writing?!
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Maybe 🙂 It’s strange anyway.
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Nice one
Happy Monday
Much❤love
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Thank you, Gillena! Happy Tuesday!
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A chilling to the bone but enchanting tale, Kim! 😍😍 This proves that kindness is something we carry with us through the realm! xx
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Thank you, Sanaa!
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You’re most welcome! 🙂
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A heartbreaking tale, Kim: I can see why this ghost wouldn’t want to leave, but wouldn’t want to do any harm either.
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Thank you, Ingrid. I write quite a lot about ghosts, usually benevolent ones. My children’s novel, Joe and Nelly , is about one of them.
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I love the thought of being at peace with a benevolent ghost. It does make sense to have someone else steering your pen, but I hope that the author managed to blend some words of her own.
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I am fond of benevolent ghosts, Bjorn. The ghost in my novel, Joe and Nelly, is one too. I did have a story published about the ghost of an aristocrat who was guillotined in the French Revolution, who guided the pen of a writer staying at his chateau. I included it in mt little anthology, Between Heartbeats..
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Oh what fun! Perhaps that was Taylor Caldwell’s story. It made me think of her.
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Thank you, Bev! I’ve heard of Taylor Caldwell but never read anything by her.
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My kind of ghost story and I adore the image you used.
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Thank you, Lisa!
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You’re very welcome.
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Sometimes inspiration descends from the mysterious places; a wonderful take on the prompt.
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Thank you, Glenn. I think some of my writing is of the automatic kind, but I’ve never seen the ghost.
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I love ghost stories, and this is a good one. I hope that ghost remained kind.
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Thank you, Merril. I love ghost stories too. The Victorians told ghost stories at Christmas and A Christmas Carol is one of my favourites. I think the ghost in my story would always be kind.
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I love a lighthearted ghost story, and I initially thought this was going to swing to a dark turn. Boy, I am glad I was wrong. This is a beautiful story and the ending made me smile.
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Thank you, Lucy. I love the Victorian tradition of telling ghost stories at Christmas, and I enjoy writing them too.
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I love your story! A great take on the prompt!
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Thank you so much, Dwight. I couldn’t stay long last night, as I was dealing with a friend’s dilemma, but will be back shortly to read and comment.
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You are welcome
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Ace!
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Thank you, Nick!
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I really like this, Kim. A little spooky but also sweet.
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Thank you, Debi. I love reading ghost stories of all kinds and enjoy writing them.
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A muse-ghost…I like that idea! (K)
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I’ve written a few stories about automatic writing.
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Great little ghost story for our time and all times — the so-called Great War (actually we’ve been at endless war since 1914…) was a huge tragic hiatus. Well done. I am sure psychography is real.
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Thank you, Francis. I think we pick up things on the ether whether we want to or not.
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ha we never know what might be lurking in these old homes … a gentle ghost story Kim
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Thanks Kate!
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most welcome, it’s a great read!
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What a daunting and enchanting tale! Beautifully rendered!
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Thank you, Eugenia!
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Oh we should all be so lucky. Fine work,KR
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Cheers Ron!
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Oh, I love this. I do believe that sometimes ghosts write through us.
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Thank you. Me too, Linda!
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That’s a tale I’d like to read!
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😊
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