I see clearly. I see blossom. I see ripples in leaves. I see movement in trees. I see the definition of petals. I almost see green chlorophyll pulsing through vein and stem. I see the black and white gloss of the handsome magpie by the garden gate. Kim M. Russell, 2nd April 2022
It’s 22nd April, the day after my first eye op and, although the sight in my right eye is clear for distance now I’ve taken the eye shield off, I’m having trouble reading and working on the computer, so I’ve kept today’s poem simple. We are writing poems that use repetition of a sound, a word, a phrase, or an image, or any combination of things.
You see some of the best this world can offer. I almost see a reflection of what I try to see. But in a city like Delhi I need to close my eyes and remember my hometown to realise this.
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I’m very lucky to live in a very green, quiet part of England, where everything goes slowly and I can breathe. I would love to see Delhi, but I will have to be satisfied with watching travel shows and movies.
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Good morning to you, and your clarity of distance ❤️
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You made me smile, Marilyn. I’m just about to stop with the computer, it’s not easy with one good eye. 🙂
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Perfect for both the prompt and your new view on life!!!!!
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Love this, Kim 💕🙂
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That’s a great poem. I could picture it all
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Cheers Vinny!
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You truly see the beauty of nature. Wonderful poem. Hope you get well soon Kim. Sending wishes your way.
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Thank you so much!
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I see what you saw. So precious. Thanks. Xo
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Thank you, Selma!
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An “I see” poem, good news. I can’t remember much about my surgery but after it is over “I SEE SO GOOD.” I remember wearing the patch three days while sleeping, I remember all the meds I took. My med routine hadn’t totally finished before I had started again with the other eye.
Best wishes for you, for this eye, and for the other eye. That’s my prayer too, and for the medical folk who ‘doctor’ you up.
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Thank you, Jim!
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You see the beauty and that is all one needs to see. The shape compliments the words in the poem. Lovely!
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Thank you very much!
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eye op! I hope recovery goes smoothly ~
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Thanks Michael! One done and the other to go in a few weeks time.
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