Yours is the face I see when I awake,
its slumber-toasted skin is pillow-creased,
a welcome comfort to the nightmare ache
from which I have been recently released.
You stir – and in that moment I must smile,
the naked truth of your expression slays
my fragile heart and I must sit a while
pondering fond memories of days
and nights we spent together in our bed,
enjoying youth and freedom from all cares.
I snuggle up against you, kiss your head –
your lips find mine and take me unawares.
We may have lost the vigour of our prime
but you’re my love, and love’s not bound by time.
Kim M. Russell, 9th April 2023

Image by Annie Spratt on Unsplash
It’s Easter Sunday, the ninth day of NaPoWriMo and, after yesterday’s ‘Twenty Projects’, today’s prompt is a welcome one! Our challenge is to write in what is probably the most robust poetic form in English: a sonnet. We may incorporate tradition as much or as little as we like – while keeping in general to the theme of love.
Lovely, Kim, both in the spirit of the prompt and its execution. Like you, I think that if you call a poem a sonnet, it has to follow certain rules, otherwise it’s just a poem.
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thank you, Jane. I’ve always loved and written sonnets; although I sometimes tweak them a little, I try not to break all the rules.
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There’s tweaking, and there’s completely disregarding…
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I enjoyed your sonnet….very nice….thank you!
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Thank you, Cressida!
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This was so beautiful to read. It felt like sun’s first rays — soft and hopeful. Love this…’its slumber-toasted skin is pillow-creased,’
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Thank you, Arti!
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Beautiful, just beautiful, Kim! Love it. ❤️
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Thanks so much, Punam!
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Meisterverse, KR. I esp L-O-V-E that closing couplet. Thanks.
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Thank you Ron, and Happy Easter!
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Oh, Kim…you had me with the opening line alone…❤️❤️❤️ and then i was ushered slowly by your words untill the last syllable…this is beautiful
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Thank you kindly, Mich!
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Wanna know something? We have similar titles today. 😉 I like that.
Shakespearean Sonnets are all I’d ever written, until today. It was fun after the hallucinations in that vortex yesterday. 😮💨
Your sonnet is splendid. Love is a wonderful gift. May everyone experience love. Thanks for sharing. Blessings.
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Great minds and all that, Selma! Thank you so much. 💝
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So sweet. Moved by the last line!
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Thank you Romana!
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What a tender love sonnet. It actually described my morning and made me all the more grateful for this good fortune. Have lovely Easter, yourself, Kim.
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Thank you LuAnne. Happy Easter!
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This is so beautiful! ❤️
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Thank you! 😊
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Ah… Love the face that love is not bound by time, and that it can transcend youthful vigour!
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Thanks Bryan!
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A beautiful sonnet, Kim. Lovely thoughts and well-crafted.
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Thank you Merril!
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You’re welcome, Kim!
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