At the tipping point of summer,
leaves have not yet turned
and, at the Old Vicarage Gardens,
a riot of dahlias continues to burn,
their vivid colours and spiky blooms
are not likely to fade too soon,
unlike the fading dog day heat.
Grass and bark paths yield to our feet
on a quiet walk between trees and flowers,
disturbed only by the music of a waterfall,
it’s the perfect place for pensive hours,
a place with which anyone could fall
in love. It has spaces where one can sit and think,
and a café selling delicious cake and a hot drink.
Kim M. Russell, 5th September 2023
It’s Tuesday and we’re taking a walk with Lillian for Poetics at the dVerse Poets Pub.
She took a walk around the globe with many of us at OLN Live, has been some fabulous walks around the Mediterranean last month, and will shortly be taking low-tide walks in Cape Cod. Which is why today’s prompt is all about taking the Poets Pub regulars and guests for a walk, in our neighbourhoods, through markets, gardens, places we’ve recently visited. Lillian asks us to be specific with our words and imagery, and to walk through one specific place.
This sounds so nice and pleasant, and not just the walking but the sitting down and having something to eat and drink
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It’s a beautiful garden and the two men who own it, developed it over fifty or more years, have left it in their wills to a gardening charity. Most of the gardeners there are volunteers and are very happy in their work. It doesn’t just have plants but also woodland and statuary, as well as ponds and water features. There are even little rooms you can sit in. I want to go again.
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Gorgeous gorgeous photos! The colors are incredible! The music of a waterfall….places to just sit and think and be….lovely! Thank you so much for sharing this walk!!! Now I want to go there 🙂
PS: are you near Southampton? We will be there in 2024 before a cruise. Oh how I’d love to meet you in person!
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I’m so glad you like it, Lill! Sadly we are a long way from Southampton, but my daughter lives on the south coast, not too far from Southampton. If you let me know when you’ll be there, I’ll arrange to stay with her and get the train to meet up with you.
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I am literally swooning right now 😍 What a magnificent poem this is, Kim! I agree, “it’s the perfect place for pensive hours, a place with which anyone could fall
in love.” ❤️❤️❤️
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Thank you, Sanaa. I’ll be going back there before they close in October.
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It sounds such a delicious place and you have captured it so well, I love the riot of Dahlias.
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Thank you, Alison. The dahlias were one of the highlights,
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Gorgeous. Interesting line break between lines 5-6 in the second stanza. Somehow makes the falling more dramatic. A swoony place!
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I’m so glad you noticed that, Brendan.
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I agree with Brendan – I am at the computer today but often read the poems on my phone and I usually turn the phone sideways to make sure I am seeing the line breaks in the right place. I was thinking – some vicarage! Did the vicar spend any time on his congregation? But then you explained it…
And a poem as lovely as the pictures!
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Thank you, Andrew. I think the two guys who own it now bought it in the 1970s when it was a wreck. They made a great job of the house and gardens.
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What a beautiful garden Kim and your poem just takes us there 💞
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Thank you!
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What a relaxing poem, I hope the walk was just as relaxing.
“a riot of dahlias continues to burn,”
And what an amazing line!
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Thank you, Melissa. It was very relaxing and I will be returning later in September or October for the autumn leaves.
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Enjoyed the walk. Happy Tuesday
Much🖤love
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I’m glad you came along, Gillena!
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So much green! and calm, something we all can use. (K)
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Norfolk is a green county, Kerfe, and a wonderful place to live.
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Your photos and poem work really well together. Sounds like a beautiful place to visit and walk. Isn’t it interesting how some flowers can take the summer heat and thrive and others wilt and wither in the heat!
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Thank you, Dwight. The potted dahlias on our patio have bloomed for several months now.
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Very nice, I love “a riot of dahlia’s continue to bloom” wonderful line!
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Thanks so much.
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“the perfect place for pensive hours” — what loveliness: of photographs and words. Enjoyed reading this. Thanks, Kim.
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Thank you, Selma. It really is a wonderful place.
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How beautiful “at the tipping point of summer” and I just love to be “disturbed only by the music of a waterfall, it’s the perfect place for pensive hours” the easy alliteration makes me feel at ease and calm – I have fallen in love with the place in your poem 🥰 and cake yes please!
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Thank you, Suzanne! The next time we go, I’m having a sliver of the cake my husband had.
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I think I will have to visit there next time in Norfolk, many a holiday spent on Norfolk broads in my youth, nostalgic happy memories of that area 🥰
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What a pretty place! Roses at least don’t need much watering. May it stay lush for many a year more.
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I’m sure it will, Jane.
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I liked the subtle rhyme of this, soft and soothing like your grass and bark paths.
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Thanks so much!
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Kim – What a beautiful place you gave us to walk through! Lovely!
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Thank you!I have a great choice of lovely local walks and gardens.
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I love that enjambment at could fall – in love, and I revel in the senses you evoke.
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Thank you Paul!
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Love the words and the photos.
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Thank you, Sara!
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