By next door’s chicken coop, a fox ghosts past
and, bold with hunger, skims the fence posts,
a sign of what is to come.
Berries blob like blood on spruce and rowan,
old wives’ tales of a turning season,
another sign of what is to come.
On the sill, in late sun, bask crisp wasp corpses,
outside the window, a spiral of midges –
both signs of what is to come.
The first of the fallen beech and oak leaves
scurry by on a desiccating breeze,
a sure sign of what is to come.
These are portents of the coming winter chill,
even while autumn leaves are turning still.
Kim M. Russell, 12th September 2023

Image by Martin Arusalu on Unsplash
Tuesday at the dVerse Poets Pub means Poetics
and this week Lisa is our host with semiotics.
Lisa says she has learnt that looking for signs is an old practice. She talks about the experience of being presented with a sign without asking and wondering how to interpret it, and has given us examples of poetry by Shakespeare, Rick Anderson and Joy Harjo to inspire poems about signs.
The challenge is to choose one of three options. We can write a poem about an experience when we have asked for a sign, or come upon a sign
unasked-for, and interpreted it; or we can write about a myth, legend, or story about asking for or interpreting signs; or we can be world creators and design and write about our own signs – all with no form, time, space, or syllabic constraints.
So many signs all pointing towards winter… i do love the berries blobbing like blod. That is a some sign to look for.
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Our hedges are blobbed with blood-like berries! So many of them this year.
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I just read Bjorn’s poem, which started the tingle up my scalp and reading yours has continued it. Such vivid and indisputable signs as what’s to come. Excellent seasonal soothsaying, Kim!
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I’m glad our poems gave you a tingle, Lisa! Thank you!
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You’re most welcome, Kim.
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So many signs, well captured
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Thank you, VJ!
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Welcome
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The signs are there, this is such a lovely tribute to the change of seasons, I like the berries blob like blood on spruce.
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Thank you, Alison.
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Oh I love winter… thank you for setting such an enticing scene… I am sure, winter must have heard and will grace us with at least the first few hints of its presence, soon. Beautifully written.
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Thank you for reading and commenting, Miriam!
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I enjoyed how everything in this poem was a sign.
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Thanks so much, Maria!
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A beautiful evocation of the time between. (K)
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Thank you, Kerfe!
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Of course i can only relate to such in your poems. We do not have that kind of clime here. Thanks for a slice of your awe
Much🖤love
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Thank you, as always, for your appreciation, Gillena. And much love to you.
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I love your opening lines. The signs of the season are alway there if we are willing to look.
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Thank you, Dwight. I love looking for seasonal signs, especially in autumn and spring.
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Yes, they are always welcome!
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Great poetry. I really enjoyed reading this so much. 🙂
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Thank you very much , Di!
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Great poem, Kim. I loved it!
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Thank you, Jay!
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Beautifully evocative, Kim ❤
~David
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Thank you, David!
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Some signs are the natural progression of the seasons, and the only ones I personally would give any credence to. Red hawthorn berries and falling leaves, the cooling of the air. And things that come in threes 🙂
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This is one of my favourites of your poems Kim – the rhymes plus imagery are so well melded
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Thank you so much, Laura!
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This is really beautiful, Kim.
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Thank you so much, Sherry!
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I like the way these lines sound particularly:
“On the sill, in late sun, bask crisp wasp corpses,
outside the window, a spiral of midges –“
Very lovely imagery all around.🦊
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Thanks Melissa!
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Fantastic imagery Kim, beautifully written 💕
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I’m delighted you like it!
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I like it a lot, yes, we have ample warning signs that winter will come. It always has. What about the bear, getting fat to live off for the long sleep.
It was one of my chores growing up on the farm, to catch the roosting chickens and take them into the shed. We had visiting foxes.
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Thank you, Jim!
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The imagery is so beautiful ❤️
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Thank you, Aboli!
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You’re welcome ❤️
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