give me a poem that tinkles
like goldfinches or thunders
in a moor-gallop
that beats like the wings of geese
or, on an early spring morning, drops
and drips like icicles
that whistles in a windy aspen grove
or stirs warm air like lacewings
and buzzing bees
give me a poem that tumbles
the heart or ripples
the soul
please
Kim M. Russell, 28th November 2023
Image by Gary Bendig on Unsplash
It’s Tuesday and time for Poetics at the dVerse Poets Pub, where Merril is hosting; she tells us that today is Giving Tuesday, which is the first Tuesday after Thanksgiving in the US. She says that it’s a ‘movement to mobilize giving to charitable organizations and non-profits’ and is ‘seen as a counterpart to the flurry of shopping and commercialization at this time of year’.
The challenge is to write about giving or not-giving, with inspiration in an extract from Alberto Rios’ poem ‘When Giving is All We have’, as well as poems by Robert Graves and Dorothy Parker. We can be sincere or cynical, introspective or expansive, serious or frivolous. We must just use some form of the word ‘give’ in our poems or titles.

I think this is a perfect case of giving. I love it.
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Thank you, Björn. That is why I’m here!
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Oh, I love this, Kim! This is the perfect response to the prompt–and I’m a bit envious I didn’t write it. 😉 I really like all the sound and motion. Thank you so much for responding to the prompt.
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Thank you for such lovely comments, Merril!
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You’re very welcome, Kim!
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so many lovely sights and sounds – your Muse could never refuse you
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Thank you, Laura!
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Love all the sounds in your poem.❤️🙏🏻
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Thank you, Melissa!
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Interesting choices for details, would be a noisy poem full of motion. 😊
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😊
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Oh this is beautiful poetry.
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Thank you Freya!
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And you have given us such a gift. (K)
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Thanks so much, Kerfe.
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Absolutely beautiful! I love it.
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Thank you, Sherry!
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I love your use of the prompt, Kim. Your opening is great and each verse builds on to the next! Well done.
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Thank you, Dwight. I’ll be over to read and comment shortly.
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You are welcome.
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A lovely response Kim…
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Thanks Andrew!
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Beautiful poetry and oh if it be so we could be given such poems and yes you did!
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Thank you, Dianne!
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This is excellent Kim. I love the way you animated poetry in this piece my friend. Well, written.
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Thanks so much, Rob!
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Beautiful poetry
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Thank you kindly.
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Yes – Please – indeed, such a wonderful poem Kim.
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😊
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“Ripples the soul” love that phrase!
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Thank you!
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