winter
a fresh white
page
on the ground
leaves are still
lingering
lingering
leaves are still
on the ground
page
a fresh white
winter
Kim M. Russell, 30th November 2023
Image by Andrew Ridley on Unsplash
Today at the dVerse Poets Pub we are Meeting the Bar with Laura, who reminds us that we are ‘at the very end of November with a final flourish of a farewell to Autumn and a beckoning wave to the oncoming winter in the Northern hemisphere’. She has given examples of ‘the feeling many of us have at this seasonal cusp’ in ‘November for Beginners’ by Rita Dove (from which I borrowed the opening line and a bit for a recent Prosery) and ‘November’ by Amy Lowell.
Our challenge is to write one of the most unrestrained, undemanding poetry forms – The Cherita, a consecutive poetry form in three stanzas: a single line, a couplet and a tercet. Our Cheritas must be in a mirrored 2 part form: 1;2;3 and a second part of 3;2;1 line stanzas, and the title should be either ‘Untitled’ or ‘A Cherita’. There should be no rhymes; there are no syllable restrictions; the line lengths are at our own discretion; and the poem can be centred on the page.

Thanks for sharing this idea Anita
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Oh I didn’t expect such a perfect mirror, but we seem to all write about the winter season.. and here it is completely white.
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A perfect mirror, thank you Björn!
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A literal mirror. Splendid work.
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Thank you, Melissa!
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I hope I did not make it too directional with the mirroring – perhaps I should have said reflecting though this works so well
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Thank you, Laura. It took ages to get it like that – I shouldn’t have taken the prompt so literally. I only realised it didn’t have to mirror exactly when I read Grace and Bjorn’s poems.
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yes but you’ve shown how well it works like that!
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I like the effect, especially the final lines. Often a blank white page can feel like winter.
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Thank you, Jane.
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There is something so fresh and clean about a white page… and comparing a white page to winter is brilliant!
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Thank you, Colleen!
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I love that fresh white page – an amazing mirror poem Kim.
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Thanks Grace.
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Such great effect with this truly mirrored piece Kim ❤️
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Thank you, Angela!
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you are very welcome 😊
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Bellaverse
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Thanks Ron!
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Perfect
Much🖤love
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Thank you, Gillena, and much love to you!
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Kim – brilliant pure execution of thr form… and what a splendid visual you have created my friend — wow! 👍🏼✌🏼🫶🏼
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Thank you, Rob!
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Superb
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Thanks so much!
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oh wow! this is so soothing … and very balanced. worth the extra work! ❤
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You recall the magic of childhood venturing onto virgin snow where the white page is all yours to write on, Kim…
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That’s always the case, Andrew, although I really do not like snow due to a traumatic event when I was a child,
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Such a great image you created, Kim, with your literally mirrored poem!
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Thank you, Merril!
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This is just lovely, Kim! ❤
~David
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Thank you, David!
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Wow! You rocked the prompt!
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Thanks Jay!
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A perfect, seamless verse and sustained thought.
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Thank you, Lisa!
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You’re very welcome, Kim.
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I like the way this both reflects and echoes Kim. (K)
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Thank you, Kerfe.
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A fresh page of white … so lovely. (I totally blew the challenge, need to rethink it.) You certainly managed it beautifully.
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Thank you, Helen.
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Brilliantly done!
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Thank you, Dianne!
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Beautiful cherita, Kim, and I love the correlation between blank page and white snow/frost.
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Thank you kindly, Dora!
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