Why would I be
in a pear tree?
On the first day
of Christmas, too.
I am a farm bird,
a runner in fields,
and wouldn’t
appeal to you.
I’m not as bright
as a pheasant,
and not quite
as cute as a quail;
my body is grey,
but my face is pleasant,
blushing reddish,
the same as my tail.
Kim M. Russell, 12th December 2023

Image by Bruce Kee on Unsplash
It’s the final Poetics of the year at the dVerse Poets Pub and Melissa is our host with a point of view prompt. She starts by asking us what animals come to mind when we think of December weather and the winter holiday. She gives us examples of a few together with poems about them: ‘Magellanic Penguin’ by Pablo Neruda, ‘The Partridge’ by David Galler, ‘The Duck and the Kangaroo’ by Edward Lear, ‘This Heart That Flutters Near My Heart’ a poem about the wren by James Joyce, and ‘Baby Wrens’ Voices’ by Thomas R. Smith.
Our challenge is to either select one of the given traditional Christmas animals and write a poem from its point of view, imagining what it’s like where it lives this time of year, how Christmas factors in its life, or how it factors into Christmas; or write a poem from the third person point of view, describing how a poem might talk with or interact with the creature, whether the poem is sceptical about the creature is associated with Christmas or is concerned for its welfare in the current climate crisis, or attempts to convince it to revolt against those who wrongly incorporated it into the Christmas season.
Alas, I think it’s not about looks dear partridge…. it’s all about how you taste with chestnuts and roast potatoes.
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Beautiful, descriptive poem! 😀
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Thank you, Carol! 😊
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This is such a sweet poem Kim, such a pretty bird ❤️
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Thank you! ❤
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I like your poem, Kim. I guess the partridge is the plain bird!
Your site made me sign in again!?
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Thank you Dwight.
I’m not sure why my site made you sign in again. I’ve had the same thing happen on a couple of sites lately. Ah, the joys of WordPress!
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You are welcome. I guess they are farming our information!
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Sweet is the word that came to mind for me as well. What a gentle partridge poem.❤️🙏🏻
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A good point of view Kim, why indeed? Love the farm bird colors specially blushing reddish.
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Thank you, Grace.
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Lovely little poem and why indeed. He is a pretty bird to pretty to eat.
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Thank you, Dianne!
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Love this!
Pat
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Thanks so much, Pat! Haven’t seen you on the poetry trail for a while and lovely to see you again!
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Thank you Kim. It has been a while. Working on correcting that😊
Pat
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Lots of fun!
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So good to see you here, Sarah! How are you?
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Struggling a bit. Pain from bone mets. Thought I was good at pain – turns out I’m not!
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I hope it doesn’t spoil your Christmas, Sarah. Did you get my card? xx
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I did! Loved the poem – what a great idea xxx
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xxx
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an utterly charming read with excellent rhymes
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Many thanks, Laura!
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I’ve often wondered about the association of partridges and pear trees. The poor things don’t stand a chance here. They’re not timid enough.
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And a pear tree would be bare in winter anyway!
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True.
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Delightful. Their character and appeal comes across so beautifully through your words, Kim.
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Thank you, Dora!
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You’re welcome. When I think of a partridge now I’ll be thinking of the ones at your bird feeders!
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What a sweet poem, Kim. They are attractive birds!
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Thanks Colleen!
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You’re most welcome.
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What is a partridge to do but eat the pears? Enjoyed your point of view, Kim!
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What a gorgeous poem for the partridge, Kim. I love the pace and rhythm to your rhyme. 💗
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Thanks so much, Lesley! ❤
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I love the way the partridge describes himself!
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Thanks Sara!
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I love how you’ve given the partridge an innocent voice of sorts. He seems humble. Maybe he’s lovelier than he thinks he is.
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He’s certainly very sweet.
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Such a cute poem. 😊
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Thank you!
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