Temperatures are not as low as they were a week or so ago and I’m venturing out earlier for my daily walk, still wearing a thick overcoat with hat, scarf and gloves. It’s only a lap around the village, over the bridge, down past the horses and back around the moorings, where the dyke is still partially covered with ice. Even the boats have a frosty twinkle about them. I return, breathing heavily, but not enough to warrant my inhaler, go through the back gate, greet the birch tree, and check the early shoots. Yes, spring is on its way.
frozen breath billows
in weak mid-morning sunlight
first snowdrops surprise
Kim M. Russell, 29th January 2024


It’s Haibun Monday at the dVerse Poets Pub, and Frank is our host with a prompt about breathing. He says that ‘we can survive weeks without food, days without water, but only minutes without air. No organic life lives without it, but how often do any of us pay any attention to it?’
Frank writes about the importance of breath in meditation, particularly in developing concentration that stills the mind. He says that even if we have not meditated, we have likely felt the effect of taking a deep breath, to compose ourselves when upset, or to reinvigorate ourselves when we’re tired, or fatigued, filling our chests with fresh air, and letting it out again.
He has given examples of haibun on the significance of breathing and breath to inspire us to write our own haibun.
Isn’t it amazing how we can experience awareness of our breath in such ordinary circumstances? Lovely write, Kim!
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I’m glad you liked it, Frank!
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I like how you connected the breath to the awareness of what is happening in nature. I think they go together.
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Thank you, Björn.
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What a sight for sore eyes those snowdrops must have been! I can feel your excitement even as mine rises at this sign of spring. Beautifully described haibun, Kim.
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Many thanks, Dora. Daffodils are almost ready to burst open too!
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A lovely surprise no doubt.
Much♡love
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Thank you, Gillena, and much love to you!
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I cannot wait to see the first snowdrops here
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You’ve caught the way the cold makes you catch your breath. It’s painful, but it’s invigorating too.
Today I was outside in a tee shirt pruning roses and vines!
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I haven’t been wearing t-shirts yet, but it’s definitely warmer.
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The house really smells of spring today. No stove and the windows open. It can’t last, but it’s lovely while it does.
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Very well done, Kim. It is amazing how the plants begin to push spring, even in January!
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I love this, especially the way you pulled me into the visuals of your walk. A beautiful haiku!
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Thank you, MIsh!
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Your words are so relatable!
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Thank you, Christine!
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Lovely write.
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Thank you, Maria.
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Walks along the water give extra relaxation. I appreciate you taking us along on your walk. I understand your delight at finding snowdrops ❤
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Snowdrops are always a welcome sight this time of year. (K)
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I love snowdrops.
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Love this, especially the haiku! Sounds like we were both inspired by our morning walk.💞
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Thank you, Melissa. I got up early so I can read and comment before starting the day.
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Nice post ✍️
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Thank you!
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Welcome 🙏 freinds
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The ‘coming to life’ of springtime seems just like the first deep breath of the year. I enjoy the stroll with you too. ❤
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Thank you, Susan!
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Kim, I love how you intertwined the physical act of breathing with the changing seasons!
~David
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Thank you, David!
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An ordinary walk outside can be full of magic if we are looking for it. Your poem speaks to this.
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Thanks Ali.
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I love that you greet the birch tree, and I love the sound of your village. It must be great to get out for a walk after being cooped up. And the surprise snowdrop, how delicate. A lady around the corner from me grows snowdrops, I don’t know how she does it I always thought them a cold weather flower. A gorgeous brisk walk! Thank you! 🙂
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Thank you, Dianne! I’m lucky to live in a village with some lovely walks. We’re just back from a night’s stay in Brancaster, another beautiful village an hour along the coast, with salt marshes and lots of wild birds.
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Your haiku is so beautiful. I enjoyed the walk with you. Thank you, Kim 💚
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Thank you for joining me, Lesley! 😍
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It was a pleasure 💕
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Love the haiku!
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Thank you, Sara!
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Love this Kim, also – one of the reasons my parents emigrated was my asthma, I function better in the warmer clime. Felt this haibun.
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Thank you, Paul. I’m glad your breathing improved.
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Yes, a relief
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