You are my touchstone:
you heal me;
you alone
complement me,
make me whole.
You lighten the minor
chord of winter,
ground me
in the headiness
of summer.
By day my sun,
by night, you’re stars,
silver rivets holding
the sky together —
fierce gentleness.
Kim M. Russell, 19th February 2024

Image by Olena Bohovyk on Unsplash
Monday is Quadrille day at the dVerse Poets Pub, where De is our host – she says ‘Don’t touch that dial! (Stay and Write a Poem)’, and we’re writing that pocket-sized form of our own creation: a poem of just 44 words (not counting the title), including one word we provide.
Today, De would like us to tangle with the word touch. She has given us examples from John Keats, E.E. Cummings and Tennessee Williams, as well as music for inspiration.
“You lighten the minor
chord of winter”
some of the best of love lines
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Thank you, Laura.
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Stunning, Kim. I especially love this:
“You lighten the minor
chord of winter”
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Thank you, De!
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This is a perfect love poem… and the fierce gentleness is what we all wish for.
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Thank you, Björn. I though I’d lost him last week,
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Love this poem Kim. Specially,
silver rivets holding
the sky together —
fierce gentleness.
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Thank you, Grace!
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WONDERFUL! Am having George read this as a late anniversary gift. Beautiful! Touched me…..
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Thank you, Lill, I hope George enjoys it too.
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Kim, I really enjoyed how you used the prompt word.
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Thanks so much, Lisa!
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You’re very welcome.
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Beautiful!
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Thank you!
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Oh how romantic. Luv this.
Much♡love
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Thanks Gillena, and much love to you.
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😍what a beautiful declaration.
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Thank you, Melissa.
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Beautiful words.
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Thank you, Maria.
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Such a warm gently love poem. (K)
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Thank you, Kerfe.
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Beautiful love quadrille, Kim!
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Thanks so much, Punam!
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A fun read, makes one wish for sure to be in those folks shoes. I was thinking of making the prompt word, touch into a Hip Hop poem, mine this time needed rhyming words and more repetition. Not suited perhaps for only 44 words.
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Thank you, Jim. I agree that t’s difficult to rap a quadrille, but you can give it a try,
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This made me sigh with delight and wonder
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Thank you, Candy!
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I love this piece. Especially these lines:
By day my sun,
by night, you’re stars,
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Thank you, Maria.
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i love the idea of fierce gentleness
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Cheers Rog!
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oh, such a tender and heartfelt tribute to the profound impact of a loved one…
~David
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Thank you, David. He’s been through a lot lately.
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I hope he’s feeling better, Kim. Such a lovely poem, he ought to be.
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Thank you, Jane, He’s still kn pain, but not as bad as it was. He’s on anticoagulants and pain killers. He’s up and about, and even went for a walk this afternoon. He still has clots in his calf and his lung, but they are gradually dispersing, We’re waiting for an appointment with a specialist.
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If they’re dispersing, you’re maybe doing the right things. I hope the appointment is for soon.
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How lovely … one touchstone, just one … enough to last a lifetime, Kim.
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Thank you, Helen!
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Such a beautiful love poem, Kim. Sigh.❤️
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Thank you, Merril!
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You’re welcome, Kim!
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I love the second stanza:
“You lighten the minor
chord of winter,
ground me
in the headiness
of summer.”
I can visualize a beautiful lovesong playing in the background, well done!
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Thank you so much!
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Great words to describe the gift of being loved. I especially like these, “You lighten the minor
chord of winter”
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Thank you, Ali!
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Such a tender and passionate song of love with “you’re stars,
silver rivets holding
the sky together” — an encapsulation, the sum (or summit) of all that came before. Hope your husband’s recovery is going strong, Kim. 🙏🏾💞
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Thank you, Dora. He is much better today.
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Good to hear. 💞
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Very nice use of the prompt!
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Thank you, Dwight!
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You are welcome.
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Every line superb Kim, transports me.
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Thank you, Paul!
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Welcome Kim 🙂
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