If I were a cat who walks by herself,
a shadow leaping from a fence
to luxuriate in the long grass,
I would sniff flowers as I passed.
I would greet you with a head butt,
having left a gift on the door mat;
however, you would not appreciate it,
but grimace and refuse to eat it.
You would fail to understand that I
am feline aristocracy; a mouse, a bird,
a butterfly are honourable oblations
to my surrogate human family.
Imagine me, a curled comma
in your lap, the rumble of my purr,
your fingers stroking silky fur,
while I dream of feline poetry.
Kim M. Russell, 18th April 2024
On the eighteenth day of Na/GloPoWriMo, at NaPoWriMo we are writing poems in which the speaker expresses the desire to be someone or something else, and explains why. We have been given two possible models for inspiration: Natasha Rao’s ‘In my next life let me be a tomato’, and Randall Jarrell’s ‘The Woman at the Washington Zoo’. I have taken two old poems, one of which was previously published by Visual Verse, and reworked them into a new poem. The photograph is of our cat Luna.
A curled comma. Dreaming feline poetry. I think I so like that idea. And then certainly the word war would never be in the vocabulary… now this is something I would love to be too. How wonderful, Kim. I really dig this poem.
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Thanks so much, Selma!
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How cats, show their, appreciation toward us, using ways that, we humans, can’t, quite, understand…which still does, NOT, take away the love they have for us, humans.
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I loved that closing stanza. The imagaery of a cat as a curled comma is stuck with me.
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Thank you, Gloria!
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Absolutely. Only feline aristocracy could manage such a gem! Much appreciated your take on the prompt — especially the curled comma image.
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Thank you, Elizabeth!
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I love this line so much:
“Imagine me, a curled comma
in your lap”
🤩
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I’m delighted you like it!
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What a great poem! Luna is beautiful, Kim!
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Thank you, Colleen! Luna says thank you too!
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Aww, sweet girl, Luna.
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Not a car guy myself, K, but I dig your poem, especially that lap comma image. Thanks.
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Ummm… I meant “cat guy”.
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😊😸
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Thank you, Ron!
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Beautiful Luna, beautiful poem, Kim. I love “Imagine me, a curled comma/in your lap,”
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Thank you, Dora, from Luna and me!
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((Hugs)) to both of you. 😀
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Lovely, Kim!
“Imagine me, a curled comma
in your lap, the rumble of my purr,
your fingers stroking silky fur,
while I dream of feline poetry.” Aww worthy!😻
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Thank you, Punam!
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My pleasure.
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I love that last line, too. Luna is a beauty. I, too, am a cat lover and learn so much from their serene beings. Love this poem.
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Thank you, Luanne
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oh, geez…❤️❤️❤️ what a beautiful cat musing Kim🤗🤗
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Thanks Mich. I love cats. We have two.
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Oh, that’s wonderful ❤️
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Purrrfect!
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Thanks so much!
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