A ripple of notes, a wavering flame,
echoed in a gust of melody, is reclaimed.
A hushed, unweathered voice modulates
like light tethered by an emotional tourniquet
until the song spreads wings and skips
on time changes like glottal stops.
The volume dies, almost to a whisper,
syncopated drum containing the pressure
until low-tuned bass strings
crank up the volume
and everything explodes in a thunderstorm
of sound – I am transformed.
Kim M. Russell, 17th April 2024
On the seventeenth day of Na/GloPoWriMo, at NaPoWriMo we are writing poems inspired by a piece of music, which share their titles with that piece of music. The examples given to inspire us are A. Van Jordan’s ‘Que Sera Sera’ and Adrian Matejka’s ‘Soave Sia Il Vento’. I rewrote a poem from April 2018 about a song I love by a British progressive metal band I love, Tesseract. You can listen to the track here.
Such a great description Kim
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Thank you, Kim!
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Ah, this is lovely, Kim ❤️
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Thank you,Aboli!
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You’re welcome ❤️
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Reading this poem felt like a piece of music, building to its close. Wonderful, Kim.
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Thank you so much, Sherry!
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You describe the crescendo so well in this poem, and I love the way it ends:
“and everything explodes in a thunderstorm
of sound – I am transformed.”
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Thanks so much, Nina!
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a very vivid description Kim ❤️
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Thankyou, Mich!
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