A hiss of hair
uncoils
as I avert my stare,
lowering turquoise
eyelids, mascara
coated lashes brushing
my pale powdered skin.
I’m in the fruit section;
with one hand I caress
a pomegranate,
with the other I push
back the stray curl.
A couple and their little girl
knock me with a trolley, unaware
of me standing there,
the darkest sunglasses pushed
back on my head. I peer
at their shopping, turn and smile,
and the murmur of Muzak in the aisle
is accompanied by a moan
as nearby shoppers turn to stone.
Kim M. Russell, 30th April 2024

Arnold Böcklin, Medusa, c. 1878, Germanisches Nationalmuseum, Nuremberg
On the final day of Na/GloPoWriMo, at NaPoWriMo the last prompt of the year challenges us to write a poem in which the speaker is identified with, or compared to, a character from myth or legend, as in Claire Scott’s poem ‘Scheherazade at the Doctor’s Office’.
Also linked to dVerse Poets Pub‘s Open Link Night on 12th September and dVerse Live on 14th September 2024, and What’s Going On? for Susan’s ‘hair’ prompt on 2nd October 2024.
Every NaPoWriMo, a poem stands out as a postcard for me to remember respective poets. For me, this is it for you. Thank you, Kim, and I am grateful for sharing your knowledge throughout this month.
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Thank you so much, Gloria! Each year it’s a new journey, and always a joy to meet up with you all.
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Wow!
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Thanks Ken!
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Yay! So glad you chose my girl, Medusa! And so well done. It’s been a pleasure writing with you, Kim!
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Thank you, Elizabeth! I’m going to miss the daily poems with you and all the other poets. I hope to see you on the poetry trail soon.
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Poor Medusa. Perseus was possibly the nastiest little shit of all the Greek ‘heroes’.
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Men!
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Heroes, all of them.
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A marvel!!
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Thanks so much, Vidya!
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I love how you set her in such a mundane setting reminding me of Alan Ginsburg’s poem A supermarket in California… but there it is Walt Whitman rather than Medusa walking in the aisles.
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Thank you, Björn!
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Arresting imagery in this, Kim.
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Thank you, LIsa!
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You’re very welcome.
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I had to read twice to get it. Brilliant!
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Thank you!
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Oh I like this one–the blend of mythology and everyday. The details are so great, the pomegranate, the eye makeup, and that perfect ending!
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Thank you, Merril. I’ve written a few about Medusa, one of the more interesting Greek women, for me.
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You’re welcome, Kim!
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mythology, fruit and an everyday activity such as grocery shopping. what more could one ask for poet Kim😊
Thanks for droppibg by my blog
much♡love
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Thanks Gillena, and much love. Hope to see you at dVerse Live tomorrow.
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A poem that can only be described as wicked, Kim…
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Cheers Andrew!
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As someone who loves writing and reading mythological poems 😀 I loved yours so so much, Kim! I can almost picture the image “the darkest sunglasses pushed back on my head.” Gorgeously rendered 🩷🩷
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Thank you so much, Sanaa. Medusa is my favourite Greek woman and I’ve written a few poems about her.
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Medusa, Muzak and fruit – what a great combo poem Kim
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Thank you, Laura!
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Oh dear Kim. Remind me not to shop where you do. With an ocean and a continent between, probably little chance of that my friend. 🙂✌🏼🫶🏼
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Be careful, Rob, she gets around!
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I love this so much.
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Thank you very much, Shawna.
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With mouth hanging open … I type “this is amazing.” And it is, I love Greek Mythology.
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Thanks so much, Helen!
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This is wonderful! 🙂
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Thank you, Kate!
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Yikes! but what wit!…
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Cheers Ain!
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Meanings layered, a rich poem with so many feelings KIm, wonderful (hope you’re feeling better missed you at OLN)
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Thank you, Paul. Much better now.
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“the murmur of Muzak in the aisle
is accompanied by a moan
as nearby shoppers turn to stone”
What a fantasy, with a sly build up and then this pounce! Brilliant, perfect for the Hair! prompt.
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Thanks so much, Susan!
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The eye make up and the peering activity is absolutely unforgettable. Ouch!! Brilliant Kim.
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Thank you, Sumana!
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You have really captured a wonderful scene here, Kim. So many rich details. I loved the surprising ending with the shoppers turning to stone.
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Thank you very much, Mary!
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I love the hiss as the hair uncoils. Smiles.
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Thank you, Sherry!
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What a sensual feast this is – I love how you have bought the classics into the supermarket and brought it to life – Jae
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Thank you so much, Jae!
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A tour de force, Kim! This poem kills it.
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Thank you very much, Dora!
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