It arrives with the sparkle and sweetness
of lemonade, echoes of cricket
on the green, and scents of mown grass
and public swimming pool. But
behind the summer shimmer
there’s a threatening glimmer
of thunderstorms and torrential rain
to send us back indoors again.
Kim M. Russell, 22nd July 2024

Image by Urban Vintage on Unsplash
This Monday, De is hosting the Quadrille at the dVerse Poets Pub, where we are writing about summer.
It is supposed to rain most of the week here. And I don’t even have an umbrella!😭
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We’re used to it here – we have at least four umbrellas, but I rarely use one, as I love rain.
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I just remember your penguin one.🐧
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I still have it!
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Love the pitter-patter of rhyme here, Kim. So like that rain.
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Thank you, De!
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And we are getting our rains on Wed, ooff… I can relate with the hint of that thunderstorm and rain sending us indoors again. But my plants are happy.
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My plants are doing well too!
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Sounds exactly like our wacky summer weather, Kim!
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Thanks Nolcha. The temperature has dropped this morning, and it’s more comfortable.
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We’re in for a hot day, with smoke from fires outside our state. Nasty, nasty.
Glad it’s more comfortable for you!
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I hope those fires are well contained, Nolcha. It sounds awful.
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loved the outside/inside feel to this and what a compact and beautifully rhymed poem Kim
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Thank you, Laura.
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Haha`! I loved the quintissential Englishness of your verse, and suddenly the rainburst came in and stopped the poetry….seemingly of course…perfect`!
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Thank you so much!
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Those thunderstorms are always lurking. (K)
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This morning is much cooler and we’ve had some light rain, which is great because I have symptoms of Covid. I’m waiting for some test kits to be delivered.
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There’s a lot of it going around again. I hope you are soared.
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Thank you, Kerfe.
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Summer thunderstorms are a beast that creep up on you. Perfect.
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Thank you, Raivenne!
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Perfectly composed! 😀
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Thank you, Carol!
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Sounds very much like a Queensland summer, the thunderstorms always build up and slam us in the afternoons. I love how your summer comes with the sparkle and sweetness of lemonade…ours comes like a tequila slammer! 🙂
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Thank you, Dianne! When I was a child, we used to watch my father play cricket most Sundays, but I always had a lukewarm bottle of Coca Cola. These days, I wouldn’t touch the stuff, but back then it was a treat.
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Yes, Coca Cola is a treat on a hot day. I don’t drink it really anymore but will if it’s way too hot have an iced cold coke. Just to get energy levels up.
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Quintessential British summer! You described it perfectly with lovely rhymes.
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Thanks Punam!
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You are welcome.
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Beautifully done, Kim. 🙂
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Thank you, Kitty!
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Yes! We go from snowstorms to heatwaves. Good one.
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Thanks Susan.
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That’s a pretty accurate description of here too (bar the cricket).
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How evocative of summers past and aware of the threats implicit in the present and future weather and climate.
However I am glad to see, in one of your comments, that you like the rain. When I was five or six, my slightly older, horse-adoring sister and I used to gallop around the (little, urban) garden whinnying, during thunder storms!
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I have always loved jumping in puddles and, when I was a child, ‘painted’ pictures on the pavement with grass and rain.
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Yes, that threatening glimmer… I actually wrote two summer poems and found it hard to keep the dark clouds away from them both. An age thing perhaps, or the age we find ourselves in. The rain has been more ominous than I ever remember, in that when it rains it pours and has been quite damaging. Well done with your poem from shimmer to glimmer, very evocative.
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Thank you, and I agree about it being hard to keep the dark clouds away.
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This quadrille made me smile, Kim! That “threatening glimmer” of rain never seems to be far behind in Britain or Belgium, as I can attest from my days in the latter… I also love those opening sensory details: “sparkle and sweetness / of lemonade, echoes of cricket / on the green…”
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Thanks so much, Chris. When we were in Bruges last month, there was a massive thunderstorm with hail. But it was over by 11 am and we were able to enjoy our afternoon.
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Ah yes, such a typical Belgian experience—always handy to have the umbrella on standby!
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as an English man i always carry a small brollly and a foldawat rain mac in my bag.
have a good summer
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You too, Rog.
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I love summer thunderstorms! At least, the kind that don’t drop a tree on your house (yes. twice. But then I live in the midwest and it’s just sort of a thing)
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That must have been scary! We’ve been hit by lightning twice.
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Yes, but we don’t get great thunderstorms like the ones I remember from my childhood. I have always lived in southern England.
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Whereabouts Bob? I remember the thunderstorms of my childhood too, ones that struck trees and caused h avic.
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I’m living n the outskirts of London
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When we lived in Mitcham, a tree outside the next block was struck by lightning. It wasn’t cut down and we knew it as the lightning tree. Because we lived on the top floor, I could see everything from my bedroom window. I loved watching storms.
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Oh how true of our summer, rain again today …..
Suzanne
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Thank you, Suzanne. Yes, it’s on its way. I’m leaving my washing out for a natural rinse as the sun will be back to dry it tomorrow.
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😂
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Such a lovely piece, Kim, and a very effective use of personification… I always enjoy that when it’s done well ❤
~David
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Thank you, David.
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Bit like a lottery Kim, one never knows. I love the contrasted promise of sparkle and the somber thunderstorm.
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Thanks Paul!
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