She savours the salty iron tang
of liquid frothing from a newly-punctured vein,
revels in claret tributaries flowing,
returning again and again.
It caresses her vampire lips,
down her throat it slips,
spooking addicts in the graveyard gloom
and lovers entwined by her tomb.
Kim M. Russell, 16th September 2024

Image of Geraldine Dvorak, bride of Dracula, from the 1931 film Dracula – found on Facebook
This Monday’s Quadrille at the dVerse Poets Pub is courtesy of Dora, who is back after more than a month-long absence. Welcome back!
Today we are writing 44-word poems original to dVerse whose only requirement other than word count is that we must include the word provided, which today is ‘vampire’.
Dora tells us that this word was prompted by her daughter’s first book release, a vampire-infested mystery novel. She has also given us examples of poems about or featuring vampires from Lord Byron, Coleridge, Henry Thomas Liddell, Conrad Aiken and Rudyard Kipling.
Love it, Kim! The “salty iron tang,” “claret tributaries,” “graveyard gloom” — mesmerizingly delicious characterization of a vampire’s decadent lust.
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Thank you, Dora!
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I love the way you made it so physical and as often I find the vampire myths erotic…
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Thanks Björn!
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Kim, your poem creeps me right out!
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Job done, Lisa!
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🙂
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Dope poem!
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Thanks Willy!
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So atmospheric, real. Powerful lines that enter my very veins it seems..
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Thank you, Ain. I can’t comment on yours, but I’ll do it here.
I love that you’ve written your quadrille from the Count’s point of view. I smiled when I read the line: ‘I should like to talk about vitamin D’, and the sardonic tone.
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How yummy! What’s for dessert?
Good one, Kim!
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Thank you, Nolcha!
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A fitting gruesome vampire quadrille
much♡love
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Thanks Gillena, and much love to you.
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I can see her savouring the salty iron tang…and spooking out the addicts, all addictions lead to graveyards. Quite a blood thirsty Quadrille!!
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Thank you, Dianne!
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Excellently descriptive, Kim! I have to echo Bjorn in appreciating the physical-ness of your description.
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Thank you kindly, Nicole!
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Tasty piece Kim… 👍🏼😉
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Thank you, Rob!
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I wonder if she ever samples the addicts’ blood, and what effect it has. I think there should be more research into vampire blood chemistry 🙂
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Interesting point, Jane!
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graphic gothic Kim – the claret especially being so understated
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Thanks Laura!
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It’s glorious and gushing. A waterfall of words. I love it, Kim.
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Thank you, Katie!
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Kim, your poem vividly captures the eerie and irresistible allure of the vampiric feast with a hauntingly sensual touch!
~David
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Thanks David!
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Very convincing, Kim!
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Thank you, Judy!
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“claret” slayed me with its perfection here
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Thank you, Kim!
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Oooh, this is deliciously creepy, Kim
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Thank you, Robbie!
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lovely and spooky in a delicious way.
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Cheers Rog!
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salty notes, and claret in color– it’s as if she’s merely sampling wine! love 🙂
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Cheers Ren!
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Eek. I really hate vampires, they totally creep me out. Your poem was extra creepy–that’s a compliment.
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Thank you, Shay.
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So descriptive, Kim–visceral! I love the “salty tang” and “claret tributaries.”
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Thank you, Merril!
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You’re welcome, Kim!
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“revels in claret tributaries flowing,
returning again and again.”
This is as wonderful as it is creepy!
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Thank you, Sara!
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Ah, the taste, yes indeed, and so deliciously dark Kim.
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I love dark!
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